Home » Poems » John Lawless » Cold Love - For Contest

Cold Love - For Contest

Cold Love sitting alone lost in the depth of passion’s f a d i n g b u d s reaching for Death’s hand John G. Lawless 9/16/2015 submitted to - Four Lines poetry contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:52:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/27/2015 9:18:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place win John!

John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2015 9:47:00 PM

thanks for stopping by Tammy.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 5:28:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John :-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 9/27/2015 9:47:00 PM

Thanks again Jan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/24/2015 11:34:00 PM

Wonderful expressions John! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2015 3:20:00 PM

GREAT poem, JOhn. Love seeing this one at the top of this list. Congratulations.

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I wasn't sure if the broken cadence spaces would work.

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/24/2015 2:31:00 PM

Hey John, a BIG congratulations on your 1st place win! Well deserved. Be Blessed, Neva

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thanks Neva for your kind words.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/23/2015 8:42:00 PM

John , congratulations on 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:40:00 PM

Thanks Alexis for stopping by to comment.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/23/2015 6:38:00 PM

Creepy good! ..Great win John!

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:40:00 PM

Thank you Casarah for "creepy and good" together.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2015 5:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John. Hugs Eve

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:38:00 PM

Thanks Eve, as always, for your support.

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/23/2015 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations..the depths of despair well defined

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:38:00 PM

Thanks Frederic, we will all approach the edge of despair at some time.

James Inman

Date: 9/23/2015 10:38:00 AM

Great write John! So much to say in 4 lines.

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thanks James, I tend to dislike short forms as they then to make the muse work.

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/19/2015 1:38:00 PM

Your words enter my mind resonate there and force me to feel their weight. Emile.

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for the high praise Emile.

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/19/2015 10:18:00 AM

Brilliant powerful dark lines depicting the approaching death.A timeless scene to capture.good luck.

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:35:00 PM

Thank you Miraj

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2015 9:16:00 AM

ooh deep and dark John - so few words paint a great image:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan I was reaching for that lonely end moment