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Cold Duck On Da Floor

Hic, burp, dadgumit Weared dat cocktail napkin go Wanted ta git 'er phone numbr Ineabriated pen fell to da floor, Taking da napkin, too Ah, well, I’ll jest go over ta that fine lady Oops! Freakin’ pen rolled neath ma feet Crash! Yep, write on da floor I set Oh no, she’s a-lookin’ my way At dis humbling floor display I wave; she smiles But wen I git ta my feet, she’s gone Blasted fallin’-doun-drunk pen led me on No moore goose chases fer me Bartender, Ill take ma Cold Duck on da floor
*For Elliot’s “Drink Drunken Pen Drink” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 12/26/2012 6:16:00 PM
Well you sure floored with this one Carolyn.." I am really wanting to say I'm thinking on you; wishing you well, And hi'ya girl.."
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:24:00 AM
What that gentleman did is an old trick. He doesn't deserve duck cold, hot, or any which way at all. Fun write, Carolyn. Love, daverl
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Date: 5/19/2012 5:42:00 PM
Ha ha ha, this one is hilarious Carolyn! I really love this poem a lot! You have written a wonderful and incredible poem right here! I really enjoyed how she was there smiling at him and then left in a blink of an eye! She was just laughing at him! Really awesome write my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..I don't think that I have checked this contest out..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the winners' circle in your contest..Thanks for the honor of sharing first place with John..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:36:00 PM
ha ha - very funny! I've had a cold duck tapping on my window today, with three ducklings. They're full of bread right up to the beaks. In other word duck rolls. They have to grow quickly in the early days. I liked your cold duck better.
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:13:00 PM wery good Carolyn!!!! Wish you luck in contest. - Have a beautiful weekend to you and yours. - love from Anne-Lise
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