Cold Death

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winter came early it was freezing in the mountains no shelter meant death

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/22/2025 5:30:00 PM

I like this. Captures a certain feeling

Bill Baker
Date: 6/27/2025 5:11:00 PM

Originally, I wrote this about the animals that got caught as winter came, but people started talking about people, so I changed it to a Senryu. Thanks for the comment, Paige. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2025 11:05:00 AM

Without a home or a place to warm… indeed. Possibilities?

Bill Baker
Date: 6/27/2025 5:12:00 PM

I do not like the cold anymore, or the extreme hot. LOL Being 80 has changed everything for me. :-) Smiles ~ Blessing, my friend. Bill