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Cold Cry - Jq

Wind whistling wild through sad leaves, It's freezing as my heart grieves, Lifting my voice, lone I wail, In the chillness, life grows pale, Leaves scattered free here and there, Grieves for their fall in despair, Wail I loud, hearing them cry, Pale and cold is my goodbye. 03/21/19

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Date: 4/17/2019 8:53:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jo! Janice
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Date: 4/17/2019 6:24:00 AM
I love this Jo. A beautifully written poem that just seems to flow perfectly. Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win...Charlie
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Date: 3/25/2019 7:59:00 AM
Truly captures the mood. Very nice.
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Date: 3/23/2019 2:28:00 AM
Imagery and feelings interwoven into a poetic choreography dear little sister! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/21/2019 7:07:00 AM
You evoke an interplay of emotions between nature and human life..well written poem, Jo.
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