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Cold Comfort

Enlightened lamp post cast it's light. Shining through the city night. Dancing in the rays of rain. An eye could see nothing but pain. She lay there in a pool of blood. Her heart stopped with a sudden thud. A leather jacket round her shoulder. Cold comfort as to say they told her. No answers in the daily news. Detectives said they had no clues. I turned the set off, went to bed. My nice warm place to lay my head. But little peace would fill my soul. Somehow I felt a lot less whole. What can we do now that she's gone? But do our best to carry on. for Giorgio's leather jacket contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/13/2013 7:51:00 PM
nicely done Robert,,,, I wrote one along these lines,,,,city lights . Though it's not posted. I think it's going to be a winner ;} thank you for reading Contradictions.
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:13:00 PM
Wow robert, this is so good, talk about visual, does not get any better than this gem....
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Date: 6/12/2013 4:24:00 PM
hey robert! this is a great poem for the contest. you really painted a very clear picture and i felt the sadness coming through. ~ to answer your question, i was on the last chapter of the book i'd read twice when a character was about to find something out and i already knew what it was, so i realized that i'd read the book before. i still enjoyed it the second time, but felt pretty foolish for not realizing it sooner. ~ thanks for reading my poems!
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Date: 6/11/2013 1:06:00 AM
hey, did you finish it since I was last here. I am really liking it. So different for the contest too.
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Date: 6/11/2013 1:05:00 AM
hello, my friend, just dropping by to say thanks for your comments today.
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Date: 6/7/2013 4:30:00 PM
Hello Robert, Giorgio will love your poem. and like Andrea, the title is perfect. a comfort embrace... Linda
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:56:00 PM
hey, I LOVE the title for this one. I seem to remember it was a movie title one time too. If it's not finished, well then, it has a great start.
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