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Cold Comfort

I want so much total tail rhyme if only to ring your cold chime, desperate... I am for in this troubled world i seek someone i care for in the bleak someone... someone like me. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Bl Devnath

Date: 12/9/2012 10:29:00 AM

Classic one lies in real heart. Thanks of words I am not giving because I always feel words are not complete...., my sweet friend...............Thanks.....Loved always, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2012 2:38:00 AM

A unique tail-rhyme my dear friend which I enjoyreading this evening ! Excellent indeed! Good luck always! Thanks for your precious time stopping by to read and leave inspiring comments on my work! Have a nice day always! love/hugs,Leonora

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/30/2012 1:05:00 PM

It is highly enjoyable to read your passionate and skillfully crafted poem. The concluding line is awesome. Thanks for visiting my Tanka Demands of Love and for your heart warming comments. Have a nice weekend. -Mohammad

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2012 10:03:00 AM

This one has deep emotional worth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..If we can make it through the bleak, we should make it in the sunshine..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2012 9:48:00 PM

this is a cool entry Harry luv .. much luck ..luv the title .. sets the tone ..

Holly Moore

Date: 11/29/2012 7:18:00 PM

This is straight from the heart..how it should be! Thanks for such a nice comment on my page..Hugs, Holly Moore

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/29/2012 2:25:00 PM

Your an original Harry... Love your flow in this one.... Michael

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/28/2012 6:11:00 PM

That is going to be hard Harry because you are one of a kind!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/28/2012 2:20:00 PM

Outward looking and introspective at the same time. Good stuff. LOve, daver

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/28/2012 1:00:00 PM

Between the lines upon the page. The truth is there from a wise sage. A heart that yearns for love to share. To raise two souls from lifes despair. Got it harry! Keep em' comin'.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/28/2012 10:24:00 AM

Can only agree with the other comments harry xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2012 1:50:00 PM

what a COOL title, cold comfort. LOVE that, Harry. and wanted to thank you for my 4th place win. was that your first contest ever? It was a great contest idea.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/27/2012 11:09:00 AM

Love the title and your write Harry especially the ending so perfect. I gotta agree with David :) love Wilma

David Williams

Date: 11/27/2012 9:59:00 AM

Harry, this is a very strong write, it resonates around your head, well done....David