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Cold As Ice

She tells warm lies through lips cool as frost, while her eyes cast frigid glares. Her backhanded barbs, sharp as steel, strike like ice crystals in your heart. Infidelity coats upon her like a sheen of ice. Beauty and slippery deceit, rolled into one. And yet, you stand, as a man made of snow, not truly seeing, not speaking out. You slowly die, waiting for her to thaw. A snowball in Hades stands a better chance, than you, to win her heart. For within her veins runs soiled slush and her soul is an Arctic wind. For the contest: Free Verse For Winter sponsored by: Chris D Aechtner Placement: 8th

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Date: 3/5/2011 2:03:00 PM
love the metaphors in this peice. theres some really great lines in here
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Paula, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:29:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest.
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:11:00 PM
Chills, wow what a lady,Paula :)-- this is just really cool :) Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:34:00 PM
Paula, upon reading this again, I simply have to fave it. Wow, I love it. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Chris, Paula
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:47:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your win in the contest..those lips that lie..great one. BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Paula. A deserving entry for the contest's Winners List. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations Paula, on your worthy eighth place,honored win. Good show! Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:30:00 AM
You really set the tone for this poem so well in your first line, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:59:00 AM
Cool congrats Paula on your great win in the Winter Free Verse contest with this awesome write and excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:17:00 AM
Excellent words to your Free Verse contest entry Paula.. I wrote similarly on the facets of winter and romance luv.. good luck in the contest my friend...
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:30:00 PM
OOOH, yes, ICY cold. NICY!!
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Date: 2/10/2011 8:39:00 PM
i knew these days were comming as autum set in. a cold as cold ice while winter sits and grins. T. S
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