Coitus

*Coitus* A thoroughbred dime, supermodel fine. Gauge earnings, sleeve tattoos and similar world views. No tan lines, I'm trying to get next to you! Juices flow, rhythm & blues, wine & dine you play with ice cubes! Inspired by your movements one of a kind! A spectacle from behind! Magnificence unearthed, we tussle, unwind! Goose pimples emerge inner thighs, braille for the blind. I splurge, submerged in your earth! Sailing your sea, tidal waves of ecstasy consumed, I caused this Tsunami. Entangled, our bodies like Origami. Dreamy coos of serendipity, shy girl turned **** star flexing wickedly, her natural affinity. A delicacy like calamari! Jared Pickett 3/19/2014 Asavvy1

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/14/2023 7:46:00 PM

"Tidal waves of ecstasy, bodies like Origami." I love everything about this thought. My heart is fluttering and I'm tingling. (Thinking about such a moment). This is smoking hot, and you've taken my breath away. :) Brandy

Jared Pickett
Date: 1/15/2023 1:31:00 AM

Wow, such an endearing comment. So much so you have my heart fluttering. This thought came out of left field. I had an encounter so great it had me in an erotic space to where in my head, while engaged in transgression I wrote this. Once i got home, i put to paper. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my Coitus!!;-)

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 9/7/2014 10:49:00 AM

Nice, although I'd go with kool rather than hot

Jennifer Perry

Date: 3/24/2014 3:13:00 PM

Hot!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/20/2014 12:14:00 PM

Beautiful... I hope more to come.... Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/20/2014 12:24:00 PM

Well, visit me and the written word will tell you... Verlena :)s.

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/20/2014 12:14:00 PM

This site is much different than before. It seems most are to worried about themselves. I am not complacent however, if most don't want to comment or read than they are missing some GREAT work!! I am glad to see you my friend, how is life?Asavvy1

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/19/2014 11:21:00 PM

This is very sensual and somehow transmits the idea of the girl next door leaving her shy smile and get super sexy and full of eroticism.Very creative Jared.Am glad you 're back and it seems 'for good' : )

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/20/2014 12:16:00 PM

Thank you Charma, you are longest standing friend here on the soup. I am glad to see you!! Thank you my friend, I am on my way!!Asavvy1

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/19/2014 11:22:00 PM

Getting not get i meant..oops