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June- 13- 2025

Abecedarian in Five Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

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Lovely break during hectic work.
Merry time is the coffee break.
Nectar to tired nerves is coffee.
On your seat, lean back and enjoy, 
Pleasant tang tickling your nostrils.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2025 11:46:00 PM Not a coffee drinker but I sure like how you wrote this one. Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 6/13/2025 11:36:00 PM Dear Valsa, Ah, this one is short, sweet, and hits right where it counts—especially for us coffee lovers! You’ve captured that magical little pause in the chaos perfectly. I could almost smell that rich, comforting aroma just reading it! "Nectar to tired nerves" is such a perfect way to describe it—pure poetry in a mug.All the best in the contest...Hugs Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 6/13/2025 11:27:00 PM A tempting poem to a coffee addict like me. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 6/13/2025 5:12:00 PM delicious poetry, now i am retired, i drink coffee when i care, thanks for the marvelous poem Login to Reply

Zyrool Gifford Date: 6/13/2025 2:25:00 PM Hello Valsa, this was an enjoyable read, loved the line: Nectar to tired nerves is coffee.. Too true. Good luck with the contest my friend. Have a great weekend. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/13/2025 1:31:00 PM What a fun "Coffee Break" read and picture. I love both coffee and tea. "Good Luck" I did Tea for this contest. Have a blessed weekend writing away............... Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 6/13/2025 6:20:00 AM Many can’t begin the day without coffee. As a teen I was addicted lol. I like your poem! Best wishes! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2025 5:29:00 AM - A short break with a cup of coffee gives new energy ... can almost smell it, Valsa :) - Best wishes :) - hugs Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 6/13/2025 3:09:00 AM Indeed, the cosy aroma of coffee I could feel through your very comforting and effortlessly crafted words, dear poetess! The taste and scent of coffee actually brings so much relief for the work stress and feels very therapeutic, ahhh!!! So cleverly and brilliantly knitted lil abecedarian for the contest, wishing you the very best and sending you light always~ loved reading this, a treat for the senses! :) Login to Reply