Cocooned In Solitude

Great alterations in a lovely poem. Not easy at all to do! Makes my head hurt thinking of doing it :)

Great alteration write, Michelle. Started writing for it then changed my mind , it s harder than it looks to write. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Ah, Michelle, the hallowed hush of heaven, indeed. Your beautiful pen captures the soothing quality of solitude and captivates my heart's imagination with lush poetic imagery. Gorgeous alliteration adorns this masterful creation, my dear friend. Every line of your poem is an alliterative gem through which your tranquil artistry and spirit shines. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Great imagery and fluid alliteration!

I feel serene reading this one. ;0)

Beautiful moments of tranquility is spoken in this pen.

Just beautiful!Best wishes for the contest,God bless and take care!

I love the different alliterative sounds in each line. WELL DONE

A perfect Alliteration heavenly and meditative - beautifully created and sprinkled with loads of imagination. Best wishes in the contest, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Lovely write! God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Well said! I could not help but notice the references to your, "hollowed hush of heaven" and can not help but wonder how that could happen when - reportedly - millions are just standing around shouting, "Hosannah"? Your version of Heaven has more appeal! Aloha! Rico

I would love to be in the hollowed hush of heaven, what a great line Michelle. it would make for a great title too !

Charming alliteration, Michelle ~

Hi Michelle, You've penned a good entry for the contest. Your chosen words created great imagery.Good title and contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening and weekend.PS, this is my time seeing Alliterations done with a different letter on each line. Excellent job:-) Alexis