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Cocooned In Solitude

Alone with aqua alpine air The calm cocoon of cotton clouds Permeates peaceful patience Taught by teardrop tranquility Nestled in nocturnal nests Murmurs the meditative moon Here, the hallowed hush of heaven. 3/26/21

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Ann Peck

Date: 4/30/2021 2:21:00 PM

Great alterations in a lovely poem. Not easy at all to do! Makes my head hurt thinking of doing it :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2021 3:04:00 PM

Great alteration write, Michelle. Started writing for it then changed my mind , it s harder than it looks to write. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/8/2021 11:02:00 AM

Ah, Michelle, the hallowed hush of heaven, indeed. Your beautiful pen captures the soothing quality of solitude and captivates my heart's imagination with lush poetic imagery. Gorgeous alliteration adorns this masterful creation, my dear friend. Every line of your poem is an alliterative gem through which your tranquil artistry and spirit shines. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/1/2021 8:46:00 PM

Great imagery and fluid alliteration!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/30/2021 9:25:00 AM

I feel serene reading this one. ;0)

Sylvia Carter

Date: 3/30/2021 7:48:00 AM

Beautiful moments of tranquility is spoken in this pen.

Kenisha Shines

Date: 3/30/2021 7:25:00 AM

Just beautiful!Best wishes for the contest,God bless and take care!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2021 2:18:00 PM

I love the different alliterative sounds in each line. WELL DONE

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/28/2021 8:33:00 AM

A perfect Alliteration heavenly and meditative - beautifully created and sprinkled with loads of imagination. Best wishes in the contest, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/28/2021 5:28:00 AM

Lovely write! God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/27/2021 11:42:00 AM

Well said! I could not help but notice the references to your, "hollowed hush of heaven" and can not help but wonder how that could happen when - reportedly - millions are just standing around shouting, "Hosannah"? Your version of Heaven has more appeal! Aloha! Rico

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/27/2021 4:16:00 AM

I would love to be in the hollowed hush of heaven, what a great line Michelle. it would make for a great title too !

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/27/2021 1:52:00 AM

Charming alliteration, Michelle ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 10:12:00 PM

Hi Michelle, You've penned a good entry for the contest. Your chosen words created great imagery.Good title and contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening and weekend.PS, this is my time seeing Alliterations done with a different letter on each line. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/26/2021 10:13:00 PM

Thank you for your encouraging comments, Alexis, hope your weekend is good as well!