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Coconut Shell - 5th Place

A coconut shell, so fair and so bright More when it is lit by the shining light For without it's dark cover It looks like tawny clover With glistening glimmer that blurs the sight 5th place

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Date: 8/21/2023 10:53:00 AM
I like the alliteration in the last line Roger. Clever! Congratulations! :)
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 8/21/2023 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 8/18/2023 1:29:00 PM
Roger, congratulations on your winning placement!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 8/18/2023 8:18:00 PM
Thank you very much...

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