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For Eve Roper's nursery rhyme contest

Coco the chocolate bunny, was so soft, furry and funny. Loved to fill her little tummy with green veg ever so yummy! A little shy with big brown eyes, loved to read, so she would be wise. But other bunnies were afraid, with Coco they never played. They were white with eyes of blue, didn't like how loud she would chew. Told her that she needs to change. Thought her colour was a bit strange. One day a new bunny came to stay; said: 'Hey Coco let's eat and play.' 'My name is Empress, I love to hop, lets see who can bop to the top.' Her fur was brown with a blonde brow, with white patches just like a cow. The other bunnies looked on in awe, at how high they jumped from the floor. 'Hey you guys come bop and hop.  It's so fun we don't want to stop.' As they bopped and hopped in the game, they realised they were all the same.

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Date: 1/2/2024 6:40:00 PM
I see as well that congratulations are in order. Well done.
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Date: 1/2/2024 6:39:00 PM
Delightful and with a positive moral message. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 12/30/2023 2:59:00 AM
Oh yeah, I remember reading this. Wow! I thought I commented on this before, but I guess I got side-tracked and never did. Love it...and I'm sure so did Inky (lol). Cool!
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Silent One
Date: 12/30/2023 3:12:00 AM
Thanks but its not about her lol.. I wanted to give the bunny a bit of prestige and show how equality is important..
Date: 12/28/2023 8:45:00 AM
Silent One, This would make a fun read for a children's book while teaching a worthy lesson. Very sweet. - Gail
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Date: 12/26/2023 9:29:00 PM
This was a rhyme I greatly enjoyed and was dead sure that this would be a top winner. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Your chocolate bunny is sooooo very sweet.....!
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Date: 12/24/2023 10:16:00 PM
Silent One, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/23/2023 10:46:00 PM
That's cute... Congratulations on your win.. Cheers
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Date: 12/23/2023 12:36:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "Bunny" write/story. Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this fantastic nursery rhyme! What a lovely story to reach to children! Your rhyming and word choice! Just awesome!
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Date: 12/21/2023 4:33:00 PM
Aw this is precious. Who could resist that bunny in the pic as well. Your ability to reach all audiences is amazing. Love this. I am sure you will do well in the contest.
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Date: 12/21/2023 1:09:00 PM
What an endearing nursery rhyme about inclusion and not letting anyone feel left out, Silent One. My enthusiastic best wishes for the contest. All the best to you. ~
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Date: 12/20/2023 4:58:00 PM
So cute; lighthearted fun! :)
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:11:00 PM
hmmm, I see somebody has a somebunny for their friend. Very cute, S. O.
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:25:00 AM
This is fun and cute and made me smile to some extent. Although i dont always understand jokes this is fun plus it leaves an inspiring and motivational message here, that proves that despite one looking different they are still the same, we are all human; and children need to be educated on this subject from a young age so your story here is perfect, to inspire all kids to include and accept all shades of life and different individuals. Brilliant! I love the rhymes and concept and flow of this.
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Date: 12/19/2023 7:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "Bunny" write/story/picture. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................
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Date: 12/19/2023 5:23:00 AM
This is a cute lil poem for the contest, Silent One. I love how you've woven a micro tale about the 'Coco' bunny and how he felt lonely unless an 'Empress' bunny came in his life..Finally showing that they were all the same, yet there's always something unique in each one of them..This is truly a meaningful poem and you've so wonderfully portrayed your brilliant skills here.. Love, compassion, empathy and understanding - these allow every soul to breathe 'life' with so much joy! Adorable write
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Date: 12/19/2023 4:18:00 AM
There's always someone willing to show the rest of the world how cute and different you are. All the same regardless of how we look or act. The best of its kind, I enjoyed reading and singing it. Well-written, Silent one, I hope this tops the chart.
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Date: 12/19/2023 1:04:00 AM
Oh how cute , it seems we all thought the same, with love and a generous serving of kindness, Empress brought Coco into the fold ' as they bobbed and hopped in the game, they realized they were all the same' Best of luck luck in the contest SO. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:31:00 AM
Yes, we are all equal and we can all jump.. maybe not as high as each other, but we are all the same underneath the fur.. Thank you Jennifer, always a pleasure to hear from you..
Date: 12/18/2023 8:42:00 PM
This is the cutest nursery rhyme I have read of late. The tone and choice of words are simply ideal for children's taste . It contains a beautiful message that beneath every difference, all are basically the same. I am sure this will be a top winner.
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:37:00 AM
Thank you that is very kind of you to say, this one was not something I normally do..
Date: 12/18/2023 7:58:00 PM
I absolutely love this, and what a great moral to the story as well. You are a very creative writer, and certainly a gifted one. Thanks for sharing, it will certainly go into my list of Faves...Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:49:00 AM
Thank you dear... You are too kind in your compliments.
Date: 12/18/2023 7:38:00 PM
lol this is the cutest story I ever heard Silent One. We are all one and the same regardless of the color of our fur or the way we chew. Gl in the contest dear friend, its a good one
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:49:00 AM
Thank you Vienna, will go back to my melancholic musings soon...
Date: 12/18/2023 5:25:00 PM
A wonderful story for children that shares a beautiful lesson in life. Great entry, my friend. Good luck! Bill
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:49:00 AM
Thank you Bill..
Date: 12/18/2023 5:16:00 PM
A very humorous tale, with a powerful message. Once you can see past the color of our fur, we will find out that we are all equal. Marvelous write, my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:50:00 AM
Indeed we are... Thank you Jerry.
Date: 12/18/2023 2:11:00 PM
such a delightful and adoring children's tale...I appreciate the 'Empress' reference...clever. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 12/18/2023 1:44:00 PM
Ahhh what a sweet tale :-) A delightful read for me today. Love the cute pic of Coco too. Smiles, Anne :-)
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Silent One
Date: 12/19/2023 1:48:00 AM
Thank you, appreciate your visit
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