When I first published this poem. I a male focused just on the cock and the poem consisted in its entirety of only the first eight lines. After receiving a comment from a hen, I revised the poem and added the last three lines. sincerely typical male
young chicks become old hens young cocks become old dreamers remembering cock-a-doodle-doo cock-a-doodle-doo while the hens cluck in their sweet dreams
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.