Cobwebs

rusted with disuse heavy heart hammers in pain ~ spiders build cobwebs 10th January 2023

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/17/2023 6:52:00 AM

A well deserved POTD. Congratulations Jo.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2023 7:00:00 AM

Now I know why I don't care for spiders! ... Belated congrats on POTD, Jo! Best wishes, Gershon

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 1/13/2023 11:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2023 7:14:00 PM

A terrible feeling indeed, having cobwebs on a heavy heart. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Jo, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 1/13/2023 2:38:00 PM

Jo, I think your poem is amazing and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/13/2023 12:36:00 PM

Wow, Jo, amazing, very vividly written and with such few words! Congratulations on POTD! :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/13/2023 12:08:00 PM

Vivid images tell several stories...POTD indeed! Hooray for Senryu! ;0]

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/13/2023 10:16:00 AM

Wonderful, Jo: Nature goes on no matter what, Congratulations on POTD

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/13/2023 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations Jo Daniel on POTD! A dramatic piece, heart-wrenching thoughts, funny how it coincided with publication of Lisa Marie Presley's passing. B0L in the contest ~Anaya