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Cobwebs


rusted with disuse
heavy heart hammers in pain ~
spiders build cobwebs




10th January 2023

Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2023

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January 15, 2023 at 7:00 AM

Now I know why I don't care for spiders! ... Belated congrats on POTD, Jo! Best wishes, Gershon

January 13, 2023 at 11:52 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

January 13, 2023 at 7:14 PM

A terrible feeling indeed, having cobwebs on a heavy heart. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Jo, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Constance La France

January 13, 2023 at 2:38 PM

Jo, I think your poem is amazing and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance

Bj Legros Kelley

January 13, 2023 at 12:36 PM

Wow, Jo, amazing, very vividly written and with such few words! Congratulations on POTD! :)

January 13, 2023 at 12:08 PM

Vivid images tell several stories...POTD indeed! Hooray for Senryu! ;0]

Suzanne Delaney

January 13, 2023 at 10:16 AM

Wonderful, Jo: Nature goes on no matter what, Congratulations on POTD

January 13, 2023 at 10:15 AM

Congratulations Jo Daniel on POTD! A dramatic piece, heart-wrenching thoughts, funny how it coincided with publication of Lisa Marie Presley's passing. B0L in the contest ~Anaya

January 13, 2023 at 9:46 AM

Congratulations for POTD Jo :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 13, 2023 at 9:29 AM

Potent little poem! Excellent piece, congratulations on POTD! xomo

January 13, 2023 at 9:25 AM

Congrats on POTD Jo

January 13, 2023 at 7:30 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Jo! Great entry for the contest, my friend. Bill

Christuraj Alex

January 13, 2023 at 7:30 AM

My God! What a beautiful senryu! I want to read from you many more of such. Great congratulations!

January 13, 2023 at 7:12 AM

Congrats on potd.

Anitha Jayasankar

January 13, 2023 at 6:52 AM

So well expressed the pain dear Jo... Loved it... Congratulations on your potd honor... Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith

January 13, 2023 at 6:24 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A story told in a few words. Have a great/blessed day writing away................

January 13, 2023 at 5:25 AM

BIG congrats on POTD, Joe. Well done. Enjoy your day.

Charles Messina

January 13, 2023 at 4:54 AM

So well done, Jo. Congratulations on POTD!

January 13, 2023 at 4:23 AM

A unique write..... dear Jo. Beautiful senryu. Congratulations on your great three liner as POTD

January 13, 2023 at 3:47 AM

very interesting imagery - been more aware of the beatings of my own since my ablation. Congrats on the POTD and a very nice senryu

January 13, 2023 at 3:06 AM

Jo, a great senryu, congratulations on POTD!

Panagiota Romios

January 13, 2023 at 1:35 AM

Jo! Excited to see you get POTD. Excellent news Blessings, Panagiota

Unseeking Seeker

January 13, 2023 at 1:27 AM

thought form spiders ~ great write, Jo, congrats on POTD

January 13, 2023 at 1:14 AM

A profoundly desolate senryu Jo, the cobwebs say it all, congratulations on a totally deserving POTD, cheers David

January 13, 2023 at 12:56 AM

You convey a lot of meaning in three lines Jo, congratulations on POTD. Tom

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