Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

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Coal and Ice

 COAL AND ICE

I’m blowing snow from the old…hutchoo.
The handkerchief…it’s a drip…ice blue.
The snowy flakes,
coal, chill and aches
of chimney crew’s parting flight…bird flu.

12/27/2021

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Debra L Brown December 28, 2021 at 3:47 PM This is fun!.. Is it bird flu, bird flew or bird flute. Now I'm confused. LOl, thanks Kim for the smile ~ Debra

Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2021 at 4:25 AM Oh man bird flu! Please not that! Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2021 at 11:40 AM Nope! LOL

Victor Buhagiar December 28, 2021 at 12:59 AM That's all we nee to add to our woes. Soon I'll be speaking in cockatoo language. :) Hugs. Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2021 at 11:40 AM LOL…thanks for the laugh!

Gershon Wolf December 27, 2021 at 6:16 PM You caught me by surprise here, and now there's a smile on my face. :) Big Bird Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2021 at 7:13 PM LOL! :)

L Milton Hankins December 27, 2021 at 2:35 PM Not a happy time, I take it. Sounds like a cold, flu, or, God forbid,...especially nice rhymes. L Milton Hankins December 27, 2021 at 6:29 PM Gosh, it was sooo realistic, I thought you were describing yourself! Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2021 at 5:09 PM It’s just a limerick! I’m not sick. :)

Joseph P. DiMino December 27, 2021 at 12:31 PM Oh no! Sounds like you are under the weather. Wishing you quick healing for a very Happy New Year! Blessings! Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2021 at 12:39 PM No…just a limerick…but thanks, Joe <3

Darlene De Beaulieu December 27, 2021 at 12:29 PM Hello Kim, oh---bird flue. Does not sound good. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu December 28, 2021 at 11:52 AM Hellokim, Right! Hugs. Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2021 at 12:39 PM LOL! Right?!