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COAL AND ICE I’m blowing snow from the old…hutchoo. The handkerchief…it’s a drip…ice blue. The snowy flakes, coal, chill and aches of chimney crew’s parting flight…bird flu. 12/27/2021

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Date: 12/28/2021 3:47:00 PM
This is fun!.. Is it bird flu, bird flew or bird flute. Now I'm confused. LOl, thanks Kim for the smile ~ Debra
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Date: 12/28/2021 4:25:00 AM
Oh man bird flu! Please not that!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 11:40:00 AM
Nope! LOL
Date: 12/28/2021 12:59:00 AM
That's all we nee to add to our woes. Soon I'll be speaking in cockatoo language. :) Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 11:40:00 AM
LOL…thanks for the laugh!
Date: 12/27/2021 6:16:00 PM
You caught me by surprise here, and now there's a smile on my face. :) Big Bird
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2021 7:13:00 PM
LOL! :)
Date: 12/27/2021 2:35:00 PM
Not a happy time, I take it. Sounds like a cold, flu, or, God forbid,...especially nice rhymes.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 6:29:00 PM
Gosh, it was sooo realistic, I thought you were describing yourself!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2021 5:09:00 PM
It’s just a limerick! I’m not sick. :)
Date: 12/27/2021 12:31:00 PM
Oh no! Sounds like you are under the weather. Wishing you quick healing for a very Happy New Year! Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2021 12:39:00 PM
No…just a limerick…but thanks, Joe <3
Date: 12/27/2021 12:29:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh---bird flue. Does not sound good. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/28/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hellokim, Right! Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2021 12:39:00 PM
LOL! Right?!

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