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The Play Bill for the Godspeed Opera House fell from my sweaty palm to the floor. 9/08/01. I’m still alive; it’s a miracle. Pushing my bifocals back, I frown. I can’t remember anything after arriving at 11pm.? A cell phone rings. I stumble toward the buzz; bend over to look for it, when I’m tackled from the wing. My heel slips on a broken pencil; I’m down.What did you do? You bastard,he bawls; looking toward the old theater house’s stage. He grabs the phone, retrieving the last message— Fred get to the opera house by midnight or you’re both dead. the curtains part revealing a pool of blood: a chord is struck Seems I’m alive and after midnight too. I had a moment’s relief. My arm’s wrenched to my back. The pain’s hard to ignore. I feel cold metal; he shackles me. There’s a shout from the lobby and the sound of sirens. Lifting me, he shoves me to the wall fixing the cuffs to the door pull. The theater hall is empty except for the two of us. Through an open door, he charges.We’re back here guys. It’s clear.That moment alone was all I had. The SWAT team arrived. Smells like the dead in here Marco’s where the body?“Ask him why don’t yah. Take him out and open some damned windows will ya. Two of the gorillas toss me out on the porch for a closer look under the moth ladden lights. Just when the cop was about to kick me in the head—a woman screams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/19/2014 2:31:00 PM
So clever Debbie...can't wait to see the last installment...I think I'm going for the Villanelle trifecta per your prior comment
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Date: 11/18/2014 7:49:00 PM
Congrats, Debbie! I enjoyed your unique take on the contest...can't wait for the conclusion. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/18/2014 12:14:00 PM
love the unique take on the theme Debbie - many congrats hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2014 2:41:00 PM
ooh great idea Debbie! gl with that:-) Hugs jan xxxx
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/18/2014 2:40:00 PM
Craig's going to do another one & then I will ATTEMPT to conclude the story with ALL the words from ALL 3 contests.
Date: 11/18/2014 9:07:00 AM
This is exceptionally done and its uniqueness stands it out,congrats Debbie...huggs
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Date: 11/17/2014 9:04:00 PM
Debbie this is so creative, in my humble opinion the most creative of anyone in this contest. I am so impressed. I thought theatre was my strong card. I bow to your dramatic flare with this take. I think Craig has done an excellent job of choosing winners in both rounds. With all due respect to Craig I think this one should of placed higher. Congratulations on your win. Lots Of Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/17/2014 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Maurice, It's fine I had fun. Craig has a good concept!
Date: 11/17/2014 8:46:00 AM
A should check out more of your compelling writes... loved it! A nail biter! Huggsies, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:57:00 AM
Whummy!I fail to connect, something to burst out with. Debbie can help with context. Love xxx rajat
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:24:00 PM
Yup but the name has been changed to protect the innocent & inspire fear! LOL
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Date: 11/10/2014 12:23:00 PM
AHA! Godspeed, no. Goodspeed, yes. The Goodspeed Opera House, CT. The plot thickens! Hmmmm...
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Date: 11/10/2014 12:18:00 PM
You've got me hanging. Marco.... Swat.... theatre.... Fred... ??? I am not sure whether to applaud or throw popcorn in wild annoyance, lol, WHODUNNIT!!!!
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