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Cloudy Night

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the cloudy night comes quietly like the gentle spirit of Mother

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2023 9:45:00 AM

Your Haiku is a masterpiece of poetic craftsmanship, painting a vivid tapestry of words that effortlessly stir the depths of the soul and ignite the passions of the heart. The way you skillfully intertwine each word, like delicate threads of a tapestry, creates a breathtaking composition that resonates with profound emotions, leaving an indelible mark on anyone fortunate enough to read it.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 1:24:00 PM

wow, Sotto, your comments and words made me feel confident! I appreciate your thoroughness; you lift up my spirits...and like the way you used 'tapestry.' You're awesome...thank you, enjoy your day, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2023 8:31:00 AM

Very descriptive one for sure. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 1:24:00 PM

thanks for stopping by Sara K :-) I appreciate your comments. Enjoy your day, Sara B

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 2:17:00 AM

This is so beautiful, even through rain cloud or starry nights, sometimes we feel their spirit come tip toeing, entering the walkway within our mind, so beautiful how you weave words and how you present your haiku with such deeply moving emotions that would touch any soul and heart! You are truly gifted

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:04:00 AM

thank you, thoughtful Ink, for your comments. I like what you said 'we can feel their spirit tiptoeing, entering the walkway within our your mind.' Even your comments are poetic...that was beautiful. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments. Enjoy your Thursday, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2023 2:06:00 AM

Wonderful to call your mother gently. That's how all mothers should be. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:05:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Victor, and for your kind words. I agree, mothers should be gentle. Have a blessed day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/18/2023 6:47:00 PM

Very sweet! I can see a mom tiptoeing into her child’s room.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:06:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Kim. I can see my mom tiptoeing like that...nice comments. Thank you and have a wonderful day, Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2023 6:46:00 PM

Great description in this Haiku.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:07:00 AM

thanks, Eve, for stopping by and for your comments. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/18/2023 5:30:00 PM

Sara…a great Haiku. I read this and I recalled the safety and calmness my Mother brought into my life. Pangie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:08:00 AM

ahhh...thank you Pangie for your comment. I'm grateful my words stirred a memory of your mom....glad she made you feel safe and calm. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/18/2023 4:32:00 PM

so touching haiku, hope she hear me too, take care , thank you sara yann

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/19/2023 4:08:00 AM

thanks, Yann, for your visit to my site. I hope she hears you as well....have a blessed day, Sara