Cloudy

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cloudy spring day dappled sunlight.... shadow on gutter flickers

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Date: 2/8/2023 8:06:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku ! i like the 'dappled 'sunlight

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2023 5:34:00 AM

Thanks..SK

Date: 2/8/2023 10:05:00 AM

Impeccable haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 12:43:00 PM

Victor, Your high praise is instigative. Sara

Date: 2/8/2023 9:27:00 AM

great Haiku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 12:36:00 PM

Simplicity. Sara

Date: 2/8/2023 6:20:00 AM

An image in every line--well done, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. SK

Date: 2/8/2023 5:54:00 AM

What an amazing juxtaposition, as well as a magnificent projection! Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 7:42:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I am delighted that you found it so. Sara

Date: 2/8/2023 5:47:00 AM

How wonderful if dappled light can bring out the beauty of a gutter!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 7:40:00 AM

For a few seconds it did. Your visit added a different approach to the comments. Sara

Date: 2/8/2023 5:45:00 AM

Great contrast and what a lovely shadow!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2023 7:39:00 AM

Your comments add a nice touch. Sara