Clouds White As Cotton

Sky so blue sprinkled With clouds white as cotton puff Gives chance of moisture

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/11/2010 3:32:00 PM

Stunning images pour from this Haiku...lovely and warm, excellent work you have given Soup over time... proud to be your friend..Luv Michael

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/27/2009 12:00:00 PM

Love the title and I'm not disappointed in the content of the poem. It was very light, airy and completely refreshing.

Kimberly Frew

Date: 8/27/2009 6:23:00 AM

hi sara.Also enjoying your work. i Feel we may be complete opposites in our beliefs and the way we live our lives. you see i think that to believe in a higher power is not to believe in yourself. even though we are so different i really appreciate you enjoying my work as enjoy yours, thanks for all your lovely comments

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/27/2009 6:11:00 AM

Oh so lovely Sara. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2009 5:49:00 AM

Nice pictures in this Haiku Sara>>James