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Clouds Passing

I looked at the passing clouds That have carried my dreams away; The wind that blows sadly knows That dreams can seldom stay. Each dream of you that disappears Carries away a piece of my heart; And all that I feel became so real That it is tearing me apart. Still my heart is longing As it has from the very start; To feel the love that we once had Together as a masterpiece of art. With each passing cloud My thoughts slowly fade away; Longing to see you again With each new passing day. A collaboration with Dan Kearly and my thanks to him for his wonderful contribution.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2012 9:46:00 PM
Another fine collaboration! I enjoy his poetry, too, and your joint venture, though sad, is well put together. First verse and last verse reference to clouds increases the sense ofn longing.
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:01:00 AM
Loveland is surrounded by an ocean of tears, eh Liz. Love, daver
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Date: 11/22/2011 12:05:00 PM
Smile, Nothings Passing Away * How Could It * When Beauty Breathes Sooo Deep * My Luv, Always & Forever, John!!:) *
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Date: 10/24/2011 3:25:00 PM
very charming! light & love
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Date: 10/13/2011 8:31:00 PM
written by two who knew what to do. as in the third verse= together as a masterpiece of art"
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Date: 10/7/2011 11:30:00 AM
Empathetic souls writing in tandem. A nice piece of Synchronized poetry writing! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/6/2011 2:15:00 PM
On the contrary my friend, somebody ought to cheer you up :) About the poem, simply remarkable, as always is with you.
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Date: 10/2/2011 9:29:00 PM
nice going guys. Great job of it. You did get my soup mail the other day right Elizabeth? I neglected to tell you you had soup mail at the time. Great job on the collab
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Date: 10/2/2011 5:41:00 PM
Very nicely done my friend. Lots of great emotion. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:53:00 PM
Really Clouds passing, worded nicely and I have enjoyed nicely too, my friend. Thanks for sharing and for giving comments on my poems Dream and Light is Ever Green. bl
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:23:00 PM
A lovely poem here Elizabeth.Enjoyed this collab.write very much.
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:47:00 PM
What I wonderful write Lizzie! You both wrote so eloquently and soft, precious! Great rhythm and soul to this piece! I love it!!
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:38:00 PM
This is another collab that I have read that I never wouldn't even know it was one if it weren't for the note at the bottom... this is just lovely, Lizzy (eep! *blush*! sorry I believe I have been typing your nickname wrong?? sorry again...) -- sad yet has such a wistfulness about it, those passing clouds...
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Date: 10/1/2011 11:55:00 AM
Beautiful poetry. Tony
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:33:00 AM
A very creative poem,, E.W., and Dan.,.. i enjoy both of you,,, How are you by the way?.. Clouds are amazing pass me by's.. especially when in need of healing,,certain,, movement here reaches my heart,. take care,..p..d
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:38:00 AM
Very nice Elizabth. The rythym was just a tad off but the poem was great. Good thought. Good imagery. Good design. Good read. I wouldn't mind collaberating with you if you ever run across a stumblig block on another good poem. Keep up the good writing. Rockman :-)
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:55:00 PM
Beautiful. I like it a lot.
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:50:00 PM
Right on liz, keep it flowing!
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:56:00 PM
Another beautiful melody of words you have written. :-)
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Date: 9/30/2011 6:56:00 PM
Wow another beautiful piece. This poem is as light as the clouds and dreams you describe.
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Date: 9/30/2011 6:40:00 PM
Can not tell where one begins and the other jumps in. Well done to both of you.
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Date: 9/30/2011 6:33:00 PM
Very nice , the two of you have writteb such a woderful piece.... So enjoyed... luv Michael
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