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Clouds In the Morning

Whispy charcoal clouds Fan brushed laced updraft Gracing the quiet day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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James Fraser
Date: 8/12/2009 10:43:00 AM
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Heavenly Haiku Sara, lovely poem>>James
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/11/2009 11:26:00 AM
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Good afternoon Sara. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Thank you for you kind comments. Love, Carol
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 8/11/2009 4:08:00 AM
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Love that second line..wonderful.
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Gert W. Knop
Date: 8/11/2009 3:52:00 AM
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I like your description of clouds, Sara. I hope you had a quiet week. Love, Gert
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/11/2009 3:49:00 AM
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"Fan brushed caced updraft" -- a remarkable description of clouds at dawn. Beautiful work, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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Leon Wilson
Date: 8/11/2009 3:41:00 AM
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Hi Sara it sounds wonderful where you are. Here our summer is awful we have had constant rain, so no fluffy clouds for us. God Bless. Leon
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