Get Your Premium Membership

Clouds Catch Wind

There is a reason For storms—tears lost are given Freedom in heaven; Like gray fists made of soft fluff— Squeezing out miracle growth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/18/2023 4:26:00 PM
Wow. I don't see as many tanka as well written as this one is!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2023 1:48:00 PM
Ahhh!!! In some places in the world this spring there has been some more tears being shed. Thanks for sharing this one today. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2023 9:17:00 AM
The vivid imagery you've painted here is wonderful, Paige. Your writing is brilliant. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2023 7:13:00 PM
Beautifully written tanka. Have a blessed day, dear Paige.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2023 5:00:00 PM
I love the delightful images conveyed here, Paige. Brilliantly written. :)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry