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  clouds caress our sky, like a soft whisper…
                    gently floating by,
                             - capturing a lullaby.

                 

                 -----------
             a sweet blush
   of   love  curls me in   pink  

    and the wind, a  dreamy echo
           causes    
                       y o u

     -    to   pause

                      and wink -
                  ------------------
 
         the story of us . . .

                       

                    soulmates twirl 
        in pages of poetry,
            
           sharing light, 
                   the feathery magic
           only created -
     where clouds    drift.

   

           ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~     

          in the embrace of day 
                            as possibilities play, 
             the sunshine, 
      ( with elegance and grace )   
                       smiles 
                 and looks away

                         . . . the moment 
             our clouds caress 
                 and     sway.

 

           -  it’s the story of us  -
                      ~ ~ ~    
                     

                    
   * you and me in the sky,

                  always gliding in light and love *

clouds caress


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clouds caress our sky, like a soft whisper…
                    gently floating by,
                             - capturing a lullaby.

                 

                 -----------
             a sweet blush
   of   love  curls me in   pink  

    and the wind, a  dreamy echo
           causes    
                       y o u

     -    to   pause

                      and wink -
                  ------------------
 
         the story of us . . .

                       

                    soulmates twirl 
        in pages of poetry,
            
           sharing light, 
                   the feathery magic
           only created -
     where clouds    drift.

   

           ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~     

          in the embrace of day 
                            as possibilities play, 
             the sunshine, 
      ( with elegance and grace )   
                       smiles 
                 and looks away

                         . . . the moment 
             our clouds caress 
                 and     sway.

 

           -  it’s the story of us  -
                      ~ ~ ~    
                     

                    
   * you and me in the sky,

                  always gliding in light and love *
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George Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 10:53 PM
This is so magical and celestial like your image. Perhaps one of your best. I feel as if l am transported to a whimsical world of love and beauty and floating in the air with the lightness of a feather. Lovely poem dear Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Dearest Valsa, a belated thank you coming your way, as moments moved by so quickly, I somehow missed this beautiful comment you placed here. I appreciate you saying this is one of my best, and, that it floats like a feather- ever so lightly. My heart is smiling, my dear sweet friend. Thank you, beyond words. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Gibbons Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 1:39 PM
I loved your write from your loving heart <3 My heads always in clouds its a great place to be. Dreamy floating on the clouds inspires me.
Nicole Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 5:04 PM
You're so sweet, Dorothy, and I appreciate the lovely compliment. : ) I agree, being in the clouds is wonderful in every way. Keep floating my dear friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 9:27 PM
Sweetly romantic and incredibly beautiful images and writing. Your words alone illustrated such loveliness, but your additional touches are out of this world gorgeous!
Nicole Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 7:59 PM
I'm smiling, because your thoughts are so beautiful and poetic. : ) Thank you, Bj. As soft moments of love caress gently around my heart, they always seem to take me beyond the clouds. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Hugs and blessings. : ) Brandy
Jones Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Brandy this is beautifully romantic! Love the alliteration! Your comment on my blog meant so much thanks!
Nicole Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Karen. I am enjoying this journey with alliteration You're very welcome for the comment on your blog. So thankful you're doing well. Hugs and blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Winter Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:11 PM
Dearest Brandy, your poems always fill my heart with romance. I love the way you write about love with such softness and tenderness. Soft and full of passion. I love reading your poems. Love, Anne
Nicole Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 7:05 PM
Dearest Anne, because my heart overflows with so much love, deep, yet romantic thoughts seem to caress the page. I appreciate your sweet and beautiful comment, the compliment and congratulations as well. : ) Hugs and love, Brandy
Godwin Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 12:08 PM
Every devoted couple should read one of your poems before sleep each night or whenever but read one each couple should. Just beautiful and I'm faving and reading it later to my couple-other. HUGS
Nicole Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 6:35 PM
Dearest CayCay, your thoughts touch my heart and my eyes are a little misty, in a good way. Such a sweet thing to say. The best compliment, ever. Thank you for this beautiful comment and for placing it in your favorites. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy
M  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 6:44 AM
Romance, sweetness and tenderness personified in your poem Brandy…..so very beautiful my friend! Debx
Nicole Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 6:37 PM
Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed, Deb. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Hugs and blessings, my dear friend. : ) Brandy
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 9:53 PM
Brandy, I'm so very happy for you, to be in such a love like this where pink clouds and dreamy echos and lullabies caress. Pure heaven, you share with us, magical. April's blessings ~
Nicole Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 6:51 PM
Dearest Anaya, being in the clouds is so dreamy and romantic, and the love within; embraces my heart in every way. Pink is playful, yet soft and poetic. So sweet of you to say this is heavenly and magical. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy
One Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 10:58 AM
So tender and beautiful.. your words dance in romance, using clouds to describe the sensations... that is sweet that you have a poetic soulmate twirling and sharing the light.. nothing more beautiful than a poetic connection, because when two poets connect you get the most amazing poetry.. you have the most wonderful way with romantic musings... a fave for me my friend... keep inspiring like you do... Peace and blessings..
Nicole Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 6:26 PM
Dear Silent One, I am someone that enjoys being in the sky... while floating in soft moments of love. ( I'm always in the clouds ). Lately, my thoughts take me there even more, it's like I'm drifting in the gentle calm; as I fall more in love. Such a wonderful feeling, embracing both. And the connection between the hearts within, it's beautiful in every way. Poetic soulmates- creating breathtaking poetry. Thank you my sweet friend, for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate the compliment as well. Hugs and blessings to you. : ) Brandy
The Primordial Poet Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 3:13 PM
; )
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 6:29 PM
Thank you, Michael. : ) Brandy
Daniel Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 3:58 AM
Really romantic, Brandy, I love the picture too:) beautiful poem:)
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 6:28 PM
: ) Curling in pink clouds, creates a beautiful romantic mood, indeed. Thank you Joanna, for saying you love the picture and for your kind words. : ) Hugs and blessings to you. Brandy
Kannan Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 2:29 AM
Oh WOW!!! How romantic ?????? so beautifully written, Nicole ... Enjoyed reading this lovely poem....
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 5:34 PM
Yes, romance lingers within, and I'm floating somewhere in the clouds.. gently drifting in these beautiful moments. : ) Thank you so much Supraja, for your lovely comment. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 5:29 AM
Yes, the clouds do look romantic, Brandy, but when they are close to the earth in the form of fog, well, you know the rest of the story. I truly enjoyed reading this one. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 5:15 PM
Dearest Sara, it's a blurry moment, when clouds caress the earth. Watching them drift in skies of blue, well, it's magical indeed. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Wooooah. I am floating. Beautiful work, Brandy!!! " only created - where clouds drift." spoke a lot to me. It sounds like in absence we grow fonder. <3
Nicole Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 5:07 PM
Smiling at you, Paige. : ) Since you're floating, then it means these words have taken you to the clouds. That's good to know. Thank you for sharing this line within, and for letting me know it speaks to you. So true about absence making the heart grow fonder. It has mine recently. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Carmack Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 3:24 PM
Love is an incredible gift. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Indeed, it is. Thank you, Rob. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:11 PM
WOW!!! What a lovely write/pretty picture you have here. FAV for me... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Hi Paula, your kind words bring a smile. : ) Such a sweet thing to say, my dear friend. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. : ) Hugs, Brandy
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 8:40 AM
Hello Brandy, Wow! This is wonderful. I am a c.loud watcher. i enjoy to watch the clouds change shapes. This will be my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Hello Brandy, Yes watching clouds is enjoyable. there are always changes in shapes in clouds. Your welcome for both. Hugs. /Darlene/
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Dear Darlene, watching clouds is enjoyable, along with captivating and poetic. Thank you for this lovely comment, and for placing it in your favorites. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 5:13 AM
This scribble is so you, Brandy, you seem to live your life in the clouds. “The moment our clouds caress and sway…the sunshine smiles and looks away.” I love this thought. Have a great day. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:30 AM
You know me so well, my sweet friend. : ) While floating in the clouds, moments are so dreamy and romantic. It's such a wonderful feeling, indeed. Thank you for sharing the thought within that you love. My best to you, always. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Meadows Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:28 AM
Beautifully written. Well done.
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:21 AM
Thank you so much, Daisy. Hugs and blessings to you, my dear friend. : ) Brandy
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 12:40 AM
Very romantic verse Brandy, prefer your version at the top. Tom
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:19 AM
I'm floating in love. : ) Thank you Tom for sharing your kind words, and for letting me know you like the above format. Many wonderful blessings to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 10:12 PM
The shy sun....lovely, BL.
Parker Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 2:27 AM
New photo noted. TDub would surely comment. ;-)))
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 6:28 PM
Yes, the sun is like that sometimes. : ) Thank you, Arlo.
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