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Clouds

Indomitable , Intrusions into nature, Mushroom clouds high up! Haiku- 5/7/5 Written on 27/7/14 Contest- one solo Epic senryu or haiku- in the clouds Sponsor- PD A Ranked 8th

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 5:28:00 AM

Very apt images to convey , Dr. Upma. congrats

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 4:54:00 PM

Dr. Upma, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this fine win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:41:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 8/24/2014 3:38:00 PM

Congratulations Upma; love your clouds, even if termed intrusive! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2014 4:37:00 PM

Everyone is getting those cloud poems up. Dang I am going to miss the deadline. Nice image, my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2014 1:34:00 PM

A visual delight to imagine with your careful use of imagery in this lovely haiku Dr. Upma.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 2:11:00 PM

Thnx Connie! Glad u liked!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2014 10:51:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are encouraging..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thnx Sara,, ur visits r valuable for me !

James Fraser

Date: 7/27/2014 11:31:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me Upma. All the best in the contest, James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thnx for lovely visit James!

David Mohn

Date: 7/27/2014 11:00:00 AM

Nicely written with haunting effect...good luck in contest

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 11:02:00 AM

Thanks David for ur kind words! Sorry for typo error there!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 11:00:00 AM

Thnx Carolyn for ur kind visit n words ! Glad u liked !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/27/2014 10:57:00 AM

What a brilliant haiku, Dr. Upma. When I saw the title, I thought it might be for the "Both Sides Now" contest as the song on which we're asked to write is about clouds as well as life and love. I'm sure you have a winner here. It was quite easy to write for Dr. Ram's contest. I hope some inspiration comes your way. Wishing you success always, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thnx Carolyn for ur sweet visit n kind words! Glad u liked this one !

John Lawless

Date: 7/27/2014 10:07:00 AM

Let us hope our vision never gets that clouded. Troubling take on the theme, well done.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 10:58:00 AM

Thanks John !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2014 4:55:00 AM

- Bravo ! - well done !! - Luck in contest, Dr. Upma ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/27/2014 10:58:00 AM

Thnx Anne Lise ! Glad u liked !