Clouds

Clouds cling in clusters.
soft silhouettes in the sky
morphing mystic masterpiece


Contest:Alliteration
Sponsor Dr. Ram Mehta

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 13, 2014 at 4:54 AM

Wow that's so precise n great Arlene! Congrats on merited win!

Arlene Smith

July 13, 2014 at 7:31 AM

Thank you, so much, Dr. Upma!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani

July 12, 2014 at 11:40 PM

clouds always enchant us with their different shades and character. congrats for revealing their mystery. Mohan

Arlene Smith

July 13, 2014 at 7:30 AM

Thank you, Mohan! I still love to gaze at them... Hugs.. Arlene

Seren Roberts

July 12, 2014 at 7:18 PM

Congrats on a great write Arlene ....Seren

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:07 PM

Thanks, Seren! Hugs.. Arlene

Joyce Johnson

July 12, 2014 at 3:32 PM

Nicely done. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 12, 2014 at 2:51 PM

Stunning imagery! And so beautiful!! This again one of my best reads in the list..:) kudos my friend!! Hugs

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:06 PM

Thank you so much, dear Olive! Hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

July 12, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Very lovely, Arlene. Congratulations.

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:06 PM

Thank you, Faye! Hugs.. Arlene

Barbara Gorelick

July 12, 2014 at 8:49 AM

I just knew that this would do well..Good for you! BG

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:05 PM

Thank you so much, Barbara! Hugs.. Arlene

Richard Lamoureux

July 12, 2014 at 8:26 AM

Lovely Arlene, congratulations.

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Thanks, Richard! Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison

July 12, 2014 at 6:18 AM

dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:03 PM

Thanks Jan! Hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 12, 2014 at 5:23 AM

Nicely penned with apt images, Arlene. congrats on the win

Arlene Smith

July 12, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

July 11, 2014 at 12:08 PM

Short, but very beautiful; to me it's a winner. good luck. // paul

Paul Callus

July 12, 2014 at 5:36 AM

...and congratulations!

Arlene Smith

July 11, 2014 at 5:06 PM

Thank you, Paul my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Peter Dome

July 10, 2014 at 7:35 AM

Love clouds and your write. hope you won. thank you for sharing. Pete.

Arlene Smith

July 11, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Thank you so much, Peter my friend! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 10, 2014 at 6:45 AM

The last line simply catch my breath..:)!!!

Arlene Smith

July 10, 2014 at 6:51 AM

How sweet of you, Olive!.. Thank you so much.. Hugs.. Arlene

Verlena S. Walker

July 9, 2014 at 4:16 PM

Nicely done. Arlene, awesome... Verlena

Arlene Smith

July 9, 2014 at 5:53 PM

thank you so much, Varlena.. Hugs.. Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 9, 2014 at 9:14 AM

- Creating pictures in the clouds .... I've done it since I was a little girl ..... Enjoy your poem, Arlene - well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith

July 9, 2014 at 10:18 AM

It was a wonderful time to dream, Anne Lise.. Thank you for your visit.. Hugs.. Arlene

Robert Nehls

July 9, 2014 at 6:59 AM

Morphing mystic masterpiece. Very well put, Arlene. I have always loved watching the ever changing scene of clouds in the sky. Well written, my friend. I liked it a lot.... Robert.

Arlene Smith

July 9, 2014 at 7:02 AM

Thank you, Robert!.. I still love making pictures in the clouds!.. Hugs my friend.. Arlene