Clouds

Clouds cling in clusters.
soft silhouettes in the sky
morphing mystic masterpiece


Contest:Alliteration
Sponsor Dr. Ram Mehta

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/13/2014 4:54:00 AM

Wow that's so precise n great Arlene! Congrats on merited win!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/13/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thank you, so much, Dr. Upma!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/12/2014 11:40:00 PM

clouds always enchant us with their different shades and character. congrats for revealing their mystery. Mohan

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/13/2014 7:30:00 AM

Thank you, Mohan! I still love to gaze at them... Hugs.. Arlene

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:18:00 PM

Congrats on a great write Arlene ....Seren

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Seren! Hugs.. Arlene

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:32:00 PM

Nicely done. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2014 2:51:00 PM

Stunning imagery! And so beautiful!! This again one of my best reads in the list..:) kudos my friend!! Hugs

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Olive! Hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 10:37:00 AM

Very lovely, Arlene. Congratulations.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thank you, Faye! Hugs.. Arlene

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/12/2014 8:49:00 AM

I just knew that this would do well..Good for you! BG

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Barbara! Hugs.. Arlene

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:26:00 AM

Lovely Arlene, congratulations.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:04:00 PM

Thanks, Richard! Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison

Date: 7/12/2014 6:18:00 AM

dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2014 5:23:00 AM

Nicely penned with apt images, Arlene. congrats on the win

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:04:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2014 12:08:00 PM

Short, but very beautiful; to me it's a winner. good luck. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/12/2014 5:36:00 AM

...and congratulations!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paul my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Peter Dome

Date: 7/10/2014 7:35:00 AM

Love clouds and your write. hope you won. thank you for sharing. Pete.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Peter my friend! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/10/2014 6:45:00 AM

The last line simply catch my breath..:)!!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/10/2014 6:51:00 AM

How sweet of you, Olive!.. Thank you so much.. Hugs.. Arlene

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/9/2014 4:16:00 PM

Nicely done. Arlene, awesome... Verlena

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 5:53:00 PM

thank you so much, Varlena.. Hugs.. Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2014 9:14:00 AM

- Creating pictures in the clouds .... I've done it since I was a little girl ..... Enjoy your poem, Arlene - well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 10:18:00 AM

It was a wonderful time to dream, Anne Lise.. Thank you for your visit.. Hugs.. Arlene

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/9/2014 6:59:00 AM

Morphing mystic masterpiece. Very well put, Arlene. I have always loved watching the ever changing scene of clouds in the sky. Well written, my friend. I liked it a lot.... Robert.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Robert!.. I still love making pictures in the clouds!.. Hugs my friend.. Arlene

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/8/2014 9:42:00 PM

Love it, especially the last line. short and sweet, my kind of poem. BG

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 6:40:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2014 5:10:00 PM

ooh Beautiful imagery good luck in the contest, Hugs Jan xx

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 6:38:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! Hugs.. Arlene

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