clouds

white puffs of smoke float
in floral blue crystal hues
sunbathing in sky

skyhaiku

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 11/25/2024 2:03:00 PM

I love this. One of my favorite genres.

Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2024 9:50:00 PM

Once more, back to your haiku to congratulate you on your win. I feel this should have been placed higher.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:52:00 AM

I really like that last line. Congrats

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/3/2024 8:56:00 AM

SO, cute description and making me smile. It's nice to think of the clouds as having some relaxation time.

Terry Miller

Date: 7/3/2024 3:54:00 AM

Wonderful, great imagery, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:50:00 PM

Nice. Congratulations dear poet.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:30:00 PM

SO, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderful colorful imagery.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 7/1/2024 10:18:00 AM

Oooh, I love this one, S O. BOL in the contest.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/1/2024 1:41:00 AM

Beautiful imagery to this wonderful Haiku S1. Good luck in the contest...Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 6/30/2024 11:23:00 AM

Wow this is one of the most beautiful haiku iv ever read , not being biased! But i was just the other day looking at clouds passing by, and wondering how i could describe that in a different and not mainstream manner and then i see this now, and im like ok, now thats what i want! And i can never think of something as good as this! Impressive! The opening ,Crystal hues and that last line! Just left me breathless! BOL