Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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08.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May 

2nd place in the contest

 

- Clouds -

                                     Cupid nacreous clouds
                                     Cradled near setting sun
                                     Creamy temple pillars
                                     Cyprus grow in spirals
                                     Cloud nine is for lovers
                                     Clasp me close in your arms
                                     Closer to the divine

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Kim Merryman September 15, 2023 at 6:03 PM Creatively descriptive, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Scott September 15, 2023 at 12:11 AM Oh this is wonderful: "Cloud nine is for lovers Clasp me close in your arms Closer to the divine" I like I like :-))

Linda Alice Fowler September 14, 2023 at 7:11 AM Each line is enchanting Anne-Lise. :)

Anitha Jayasankar September 13, 2023 at 10:48 PM "Creamy temple pillars", loved that line dear Anne. Congratulations on your win. So glad to see you active here. Hugs..~ Ani

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2023 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Very descriptive one about clouds. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Terry Miller September 12, 2023 at 1:04 AM I love it; congratulations.

Hiya Sharma September 11, 2023 at 10:04 PM This is such a beautiful write and a wonderful take on the 'Clouds' theme Pleiades.. I especially love "creamy temple pillars", "cloud nine is for lovers" Ahh, you've woven such a myriad vision within such few words.. Amazing! :)

I Am Anaya September 11, 2023 at 1:03 PM Congratulations Anne-Lise! Clever, lover's on cloud 9---their heads in the clouds, My favorite.

Joseph May September 11, 2023 at 8:39 AM Very nicely done Anne, Congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:09 AM - Many thanks for my win in your contest and you congrats, Joseph :) - hugs

Ink Empress September 11, 2023 at 5:06 AM “Cloud nine is for lovers” how clever is that line. I love this pleiades. Another brilliant and creative write from you, as always. So much depth in every line Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:08 AM - Ink, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Akkina Downing September 10, 2023 at 6:31 PM First of this form I read, and it is very much enchanting. Fabulous in my book for the contest :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:07 AM - Akkina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 10, 2023 at 1:15 PM A beauteous poem and picture, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:07 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Christina Bowring September 9, 2023 at 4:40 PM Love this dear Anne- Lise. Fantastic imagery and immaculate chosen words that fit so well together. Perfect! Hugs to you Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:07 AM - Christina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar September 9, 2023 at 2:01 AM This is indeed a masterpiece of Pleiades. Loved the imagery and the terrific flow of your poem. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:06 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel September 8, 2023 at 11:43 PM Cupid's clouds, very creative, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:06 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Jerry Brotherton September 8, 2023 at 5:06 PM I enjoyed this poem so much. Sunsets are for lovers. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:06 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Jerry :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino September 8, 2023 at 4:18 PM -- the spirals, the fluffy, colorful imagination's pinkish cotton taffy -- one's choice to stretch either logical or daffy. It's all free! Divine writing. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:05 AM - Joe, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Charmaine Chircop September 8, 2023 at 3:53 PM Close to heart with love...So lovely sweet lady. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:05 AM - Charma, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jan Allison September 8, 2023 at 3:49 PM lovely pleidaes Anne- Lise I do enjoy reading these poems:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:04 AM - Jan, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2023 at 3:26 PM Very nice, leading up to the final romance! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:04 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy September 8, 2023 at 2:37 PM Cordial! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:04 AM - Abdullah, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Frederic Parker September 8, 2023 at 1:34 PM you have a very romantic spirit, dear poet Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2023 at 1:03 AM - Frederic, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit September 8, 2023 at 12:43 PM Cupid, cradled, creamy--words adorning your poem bring forth the images for the reader. Splendidly written and succinctly delivered, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2023 at 1:27 PM - Vijay, thanks for reading and lovely comment - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs

Sotto Poet September 8, 2023 at 12:08 PM I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, Anne! It is truly enchanting, with the 'C' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present your exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of beauty to the whole poem" Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2023 at 1:26 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs