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Clouded Thoughts

I climbed to reach the highest heights To quell and calm my troubled soul Hard labour to empty my mind Engulfed in swathes of greys and whites The obscuration of the goal Views and solutions ill defined Captivating, though shrouded sights Appear sentient and in control As through clouds wisdom is refined Mist and mind swirl, put world to rights Off the ground, where my peace they stole My way forward is now outlined Heaven sent is this earthbound view I know the sun always breaks through Trilonnet Poetry Contest 29th May 2023 Sponsored by: Joseph May Photograph 1 howmanysyllables.com rhymezone.com

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Date: 6/25/2023 5:32:00 PM
Very nicely penned Dilly, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/25/2023 9:23:00 PM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 6/1/2023 12:44:00 PM
Wonderful presentation in this excellent piece. ""Engulfed in swathes of greys and whites The obscuration of the goal Views and solutions ill defined" Especially liked this one. A fav..
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Date: 6/1/2023 12:52:00 PM
That's wonderful, glad you've found some you like. Thank you for taking the time to comment, much appreciated :)

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