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Clouded Eyes

The Ortolan bunting sings aloft and I shield my eyes as the greenish grey bird gives way to thoughts much greater swishing fearlessly off the banks in splendor and high grandeur sparking only diluted colors to fall into my brazen hands In each stroke and in each palette swirls of magic appear blowing away like the leaves farther away with each droplet each pain staking brush until these clouded eyes can see what isn't there a time of tranquility a time of mistrust in a sea of confusion and a place of introspection *Inspired by the works of Vincent Van Gogh*

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Date: 4/29/2017 10:39:00 AM
Hi Tim: Thanks for your reference. You have epitomized the pysche of Van Gogh as in the research I did on him before I wrote Affinity to Yellow. Great Write!
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Date: 2/11/2017 12:19:00 PM
Amazing take on paintings!... your words clearly reflect his work...nice:)
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:43:00 AM
Swirls of magic did appear as I read this poem. A beautiful write Tim thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 2/1/2017 8:55:00 AM
An excellent poem..I didnt see the painting...but I am trying to find it between your lines Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/1/2017 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for looking
Date: 1/31/2017 11:26:00 PM
Soooooo colourful, I could see you paint the bird with your words, and how your mood shifted. That is so cool, Tim!
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Date: 2/1/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thanks much Darren
Date: 1/31/2017 9:13:00 PM
I can see the influence of Van Gogh in this Tim. Really nicely done.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/1/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Chris...I wrote it after attend an exhibit of his works.
Date: 1/31/2017 8:28:00 PM
A beautiful and very tasteful poem!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/1/2017 10:29:00 AM
Thanks

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