Clouded Eyes

The Ortolan bunting sings aloft and I
shield my eyes
as the greenish grey bird gives way
to thoughts much greater
swishing fearlessly off the banks
in splendor and high grandeur 
sparking only diluted colors
to fall into my brazen hands
In each stroke and in each palette
swirls of magic appear
blowing away like the leaves
farther away with each droplet
each pain staking brush
until these clouded eyes can see
what isn't there 
a time of tranquility
a time of mistrust 
in a sea of confusion
and a place of introspection


*Inspired by the works of Vincent Van Gogh*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sergi Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Hi Tim: Thanks for your reference. You have epitomized the pysche of Van Gogh as in the research I did on him before I wrote Affinity to Yellow. Great Write!
Hagy Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Amazing take on paintings!... your words clearly reflect his work...nice:)
Mccall Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Swirls of magic did appear as I read this poem. A beautiful write Tim thank you for sharing it.
Chircop Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 8:55 AM
An excellent poem..I didnt see the painting...but I am trying to find it between your lines Tim.
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Thanks for looking
White Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:26 PM
Soooooo colourful, I could see you paint the bird with your words, and how your mood shifted. That is so cool, Tim!
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Thanks much Darren
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 9:13 PM
I can see the influence of Van Gogh in this Tim. Really nicely done.
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Chris...I wrote it after attend an exhibit of his works.
Vaso Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:28 PM
A beautiful and very tasteful poem!
Smith Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Thanks
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