Cloudburst

Much drama and action is conveyed in few words, through your brilliant writing, Harry. I much enjoyed visiting this wild, stormy scene. :)

I am taken away in your intense imagery dear Harry ! What a gift you have to describe this scene in a few words .Wonderful … Bravo ! Big hugs, Susan :) Hope you are smiling and feeling better .

Good Morning hh. The tanka is such an under rated format. Your moment and scene are both lovely with imagery. Thank you for sharing with us. May today be a good day. Enjoy the weekend. Blessings always. (smile)

Well written Harry. That sure can happen fast. Take care, my friend :)

Wonderful visuals Harry! The power behind a storm can be quite scary. I enjoyed reading your "Cloudburst" this morning. Hugs to you my friend :-)

Oh, my goodness Harry! I did see a tent flip over and blow away, happily, nobody was in it at the time!

It happens fast Harry before you know it your in it and running for cover. Well written my friend...

What a shock ! Harry you wrote in 5 little lines, what would take most of us a page to write, and yet every detail, every shivery deluge, and windy thief stealing their tent, right up to the unexpected soaking they received. Wonderful Harry. A delight to read.

Such a powerful, clever 'Cloudburst' of a poem Harry my Friend, Thoroughly enjoyed and always appreciate your excellent succinct humor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brilliant tanka my dear friend Harry. Thanks a lot for sharing again another creative and stellar poem of yours. God bless you always and your writings. Take care always my dear friend. Hugs

Love good tanka's Harry! You nailed a crisp twisting last line, artful poets like yourself are quite accomplished at this sorta magic!

frivolity of life transient moments and wind bursts of change, all can be re arranged at a moment's notice dear Harry, lovely Haiku :)

What a bummer...or was it? Love this! Nice work, Harry

Cloudburst is something abrupt and unanticipated. You have brought its force and fury so well, harry !

Vintage Harry Horseman, I'd say. A lively combination of the possible, the impossible, the hilarious, and the realism of it -- all in five lines!

Visual snapshot speaks volumes, HH. ~;o)

Hi Harry, a refrshing Haiku. Prayers from Panagiota

An outburst of clouds always has that effect. Harry, you paint vivid pictures. I hope you continue to feel good my friend.

Cloudburst will do that every time. Dynamic images you convey Harry. Stay well my friend.

What a picture! Shame we can’t see the video. Great story, succinctly written.

That would be a terrifying shower. LOL..Creative work or did it happen to you? Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

The weather said douch'e Harry.' Which you so well convey; today.'

I can imagine the disaster on that camping site.

Time to get up says mother nature, they didn't anchor it enough, we live and learn Hope your on the mend Harry. Tom

Mother nature at her best, giving humans an endurance test, it's time for a quick break. Short and sweet, Harry! Well done...ab