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My darling spot is a grassy hill, Where I go to hear the bluebirds thrill, Sometimes in mauve marigold dawn morn, As waking dreams are in stillness born! Other times to taste hot noonday bliss, Sweeping me off to the clouds' abyss, Of red sunsets, or nights after nine. That time's my accomplice, is just fine- With nature dancing its borderlines! Written on May 17, 2021 For: A Time for Nine Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 5/31/2021 6:43:00 AM
The trill of bluebirds chirping is a sound worth remembering. My dad built a picnic table round a tree on the far side of our lot with benches. I used to love to sit there and enjoy nature at work. Beautiful piece. Congrats!
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Date: 5/21/2021 1:33:00 PM
Great poetry! very good!! Congrats on a well deserved top spot!!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/21/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thank you for you valued kind thoughts, Krish. :)
Date: 5/21/2021 6:28:00 AM
What delightful imagery Evelyn, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/21/2021 10:49:00 AM
I extend my deepest thanks, Jan. :) hugs xx
Date: 5/20/2021 11:07:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last two lines. God bless you.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/21/2021 10:53:00 AM
Your delight in this poem is my joy, Beata. Thanks so much for your comment. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Date: 5/20/2021 9:25:00 PM
Lovely and much deserving the win, Evelyn:) congratulations:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 10:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Date: 5/20/2021 6:14:00 PM
Such an amazing write dear Evelyn...Congrats on your win :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 7:10:00 PM
Your kind words warm my heart, Carol. Thank you. :)
Date: 5/20/2021 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
Date: 5/20/2021 12:38:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 4:31:00 PM
Hi Alexis, Thank you for your thoughtful, warm words of congratulations. I hope you have a very pleasant evening :) Evelyn
Date: 5/20/2021 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Evelyn. You've done it again. Marvelous!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 11:51:00 AM
I appreciate that, Milton.
Date: 5/20/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/20/2021 10:46:00 AM
This is so lyrical and lovely, Evelyn, it took me to cloud nine for sure, thank you for entering, congratulations on your trophy win!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/20/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words of congratulations, Michelle. It was a great pleasure to participate in such an exciting and interesting contest. Best of wishes.
Date: 5/19/2021 2:43:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, Your skillful words and descriptions transported your reader within this write. It was a “cloud nine” experience .” Excellent job. Best wishes in contest:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/19/2021 2:57:00 PM
Alexis, I am on cloud nine due to your thrilling remarks. Thank you for your wonderful insights and appreciation.. Have a great evening, my friend, Evelyn :)
Date: 5/18/2021 6:25:00 PM
This one is definitely a keeper, Evelyn. great job!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/18/2021 8:08:00 PM
Glad you like it. Thank you.
Date: 5/18/2021 2:04:00 AM
This is a gem of a poem a cameo that revive our spirit.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/18/2021 8:31:00 AM
So wonderful that it does. Thank you.
Date: 5/17/2021 7:06:00 PM
Very well penned poem Evelyn, with wonderful imagery: Where I go to hear the bluebirds thrill, Sometimes in mauve marigold dawn morn, As waking dreams are in stillness born! Great job, wish for the best in the contest
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/17/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lasaad. Your pleasure in this poem is my great joy. Blessings, Evelyn
Date: 5/17/2021 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful, Evelyn ~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/17/2021 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, Line. :D

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