*cloud 10*

.               ( Cloud  10 )
 { Collaboration with }  *NATHAN DILTS*
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 Nathan Dilts :-)

My babe, My Auspice, I want to give you this 
Its my heart on a string attached to a ring 
Wear it around your heart with a hug and a kiss
So you can always feel it beating for you, my everything
 
Hold it close and tight on those lonely nights
When you can not be together with me 
Let its beating set you on cloud ten near the light 
So love, beauty, and comfort is all you see 

My love, let us intertwine our fates and let them resonate 
With a perpetual system that glows and glistens
A spark of friendship destined by the stars to detonate 
My love, let our hearts sing while the heavens listen 

The perfect expression of a perfect emotion 
Nurtured and tended with affection unended
You are my moon and I am your ocean 
Let our love ride cloud ten and become transcended 

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Poet Destroyer :-)

My love, My Sweet, you’re my love and irresistible desire 
With an endless vow I will cherish your heart 
My heart for you is like a ball of fire 
I place this ring by my heart with the promise to never part 

Your heart beat makes this love complete
To give me such a gift one can’t live without 
Side by side I view the light on cloud ten with you my sweet
With your heart comes comfort and security and the beauty of no doubt 

My Sweet you spin my heart around
Like a kaleidoscope we will view every color we can think of
You lift my mind like a butterfly that floats off  the ground
Our friendship connected our fate into promises of the best love

The gravity between me and you gives rhythm to our hearts 
Our emotions will participate like a clock time and time again
You are the sun giving light to my ground creating the perfect art
Our energy will ride the wind and take us both on cloud ten

                .               ( Cloud  10 )
             { Collaboration with }  *NATHAN DILTS*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/17/2016 6:40:00 PM
Simply beautiful, PD. 'Nuff said. Much love to you and your beloved. Many blessings from above.
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Date: 3/20/2016 2:46:00 PM
So how is that cloud holding up, PD? Hey, I just saw a collab by you and Fiery red. Or is it REd Fiery? Anyway, why don't you post it as well. it was a really nice one you both did together.
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:14:00 PM
A beautiful and emotional collaboration...love that goes beyond cloud 9!! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:21:00 PM
this still makes me say aweeee
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:15:00 AM
PD This is a wonderful and sweet write. I could feel the love and devotion in every line. The sentiment and emotion fills the reader with joy. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 4/19/2013 12:41:00 AM
nicely done PD, it's funny I find this one of your cuz you just read my Sweet Ecstasy, A friend "male" in Colorado sent me 5 words, I tried to find/ remember the words, so I could tell you ? hearth, fur were two of them ;} He said lets see what you can do .,,,, I see you won with this collaboration ;}
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:14:00 AM
Many congratulations to you Nathan and pd on your win in Walayee's contest ...:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:12:00 PM
congrats to you both on your win in the contest with this excellent and very romantic write...
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 8:41:00 AM
Great Job DP, Congratulations on Second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulation PD!!! :)
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congrats to you both : )
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:16:00 PM
oh, love the dialogue, PD! sensational with winning kisses..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:18:00 PM
congratulations on the second place win the contest, P.D and nathan Dilts
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:57:00 PM
this is great congratulations..
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:26:00 PM
What a great collaboration ....both poems speak beautifully!! Congratulations P D...and to Nathan as well !!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congrats P.D. my BFF on your big win for your collab with Nate in Lay's cool contest luv.. awesome write as always and a super win ..your BFF for life .. beyond and back..luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:44:00 PM
Boy how sweet is this! So very happy for you two great kind hearts! Light & Love
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congrats PD! Lay
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:38:00 AM
what a gay couple ' k.
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Date: 12/10/2010 5:04:00 AM
"The perfect expression of a perfect emotion", gotten at cloud 10, like the bliss created and fashioned by father of nature. never to end but to linger for you and I's sake, only on cloud ten. THE KILLING LINE...."our emotions will participate like a clock time and time again." you make me eager to see you each day of my life. i have found a perfect match in you PD. please, my heart is ready, TAKE ME TO YOUR CLOUD 10.
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:37:00 PM
This poem has the appeal of a renga. So, cool! Cloud 10-- how original and a way to think outside of the box! Thanks for commenting on my poem "surrender and gratitude" Love, Susan
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:32:00 AM
just dropping by to say hi to ms. cloud 10 :) hope you got some sleep though-- & yup I am here eeek----uh-huh all your fault lol-- nah-- it's my fault...nikko :)
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Date: 8/28/2010 12:45:00 PM
Great work you two ..Give us another one soon..Sara ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2010 3:46:00 AM
Cool and light poetry. Enjoyed! Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses
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