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Closure--Revised

Softly, tenderly whisper it to me just once more I must hear it before the closing of the door. Tell me in that voice that’s wired to my soul Tell me you love me with a love I alone know. Hold me, mold me to your charms complete Soothe me with balmed hands before I sleep. Of a truth, I need you now as never before, There is a beckoning from that distant shore. I tremble now, feeling the fateful hour near It will cruelly seize what I have ever held dear. But we knew in the backburner of our minds That for every love, time this moment finds. Softly, tenderly, whisper it to me just once more Hurry, love, there is a rasping at the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/25/2016 1:49:00 PM
(: Brilliant poem here! Every line is articulate and creative with passion. Thanks for sharing ~JWE ps: a 7 for sure!
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 12/31/2016 10:22:00 PM
You're welcome! (: Awesome! Thanks, you too! Happy 2017 to you too. (:
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/30/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, JW. Your kind words give me the courage to face a blank computer screen (and oh how I need that). I hope all is well with you and your loved ones, and that 2017 brings blessings.
Date: 5/18/2015 6:15:00 PM
Beautifully written and expressed. Love the expression "backburner of our minds". Thanks for posting this romantic poem. Keep writing. / M
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/18/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice. I was close to giving up on it. Your kind, timely words made me reconsider. So, I'm especially grateful for your comment.

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