Closin' Time

Closin' Time

She said now Floyd don't get too close,
I just came here to dance
I came to hear some country tunes
Ain't thinkin' 'bout romance

He said, Wilma, I'm a changed man
Just dance with me and see
I'll stick to two-step sure enough
An' you'll be proud of me

An' so the juke box played George Jones
And Willie now and then
Floyd an' Wilma drank Lone Star
'Til can't remember when

The time flew by 'til half past one
They'd 'bout wore out their feet
Floyd said Wilma don't take me wrong,
But I got brand new sheets

A changed man as I said before
You see me at my best
But I can see you’re plum wore out
An' you could use some rest

She said I've heard this line before
Then laughed and shook her head
I'm glad that you ain't changed a bit
Let's go and find your bed

Now they've children of their own
A pair of boys, two girls
They do their best to raise them right
To face this big ol' world

She warns the girls 'bout closin' time -
Be careful who you pick!
He tells the boys 'bout closin' time -
New sheets'll do the trick!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Shameless ~ lol
Hoffman Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Hey Larry, it's Cheryl not Charlie!:)
Bradfield Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Sorry Cheryl...got my reply boxes crossed..thank you and I'm glad you're a Cowboy fan!!!
Hoffman Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Well done and humorous as usual! I am definitely a cowboy fan!:)
Bradfield Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Charlie..always a pleasure to see you
Smith Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 7:49 PM
I'm back for more, thanks Larry...
Bradfield Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Charlie..always a pleasure to see you
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