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Closer Than a Kiss

Too close to my heart
you,your lavender fragrance,
that kiss is still due!
In my mind your touch so soft,
every flower lavender.



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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2013 11:33:00 AM

catching up on your past poems ever since my leave... so sweetly expressed, buddy!..:)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/17/2013 9:31:00 PM

so very nice Kash ;}

Sean Goodwin

Date: 1/14/2013 9:52:00 AM

Very soothing! Many congrats and thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean

Heather Ober

Date: 1/9/2013 8:55:00 AM

This is so sweet, Kash :) Big congrats!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/9/2013 5:10:00 AM

congrats on your big win Kash :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:59:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2013 7:37:00 PM

congrats on your win Kash

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 6:19:00 PM

Congrad's Kash keep them coming! Light & Love

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/8/2013 12:49:00 PM

Congrats, Kash, I love this one! So romantic... how nice to read something written with love... we've all been so down and distraught, as of late, what with all the sad news in the world. Perhaps, I should take my pen in this direction, too. Remind myself of all the joy in our days... my heart feels so heavy with the global situation... thanks for this. It made me smile. Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2013 5:46:00 PM

Kash, finally now that the contest is judged , I can tell you that I think you came in fourth place with this gem. I seem to remember this one placed pretty high. It's gorgeous!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/7/2013 12:05:00 AM

Lovely and romantic!

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 1/6/2013 8:49:00 PM

beautiful.sandyivy

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/5/2013 11:48:00 AM

It's beautiful like the lavender fragrance and refreshing like the morning Rose petals. Many thanks for your good wishes. I am sending my Good Wishes for a very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2013. Sorry my friend for some delay in replying to you. I have posted a Song on the Rape victim of Delhi containing a message for our countrymen on my music channel "RavindraKK1" Love and best wishes always..Ravindra...Kash Poet

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/5/2013 9:54:00 AM

What a romantic Tanka - unfolding like a flowering rose and swirling like perfume. Thanks Kash for your encouraging comments on my Tanka Video Games Played. -Mohammad

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2013 3:10:00 PM

a beautiful poem to rest my thoughts on. very suave are you, your image is beyond perfect. good feel*LUV~SKAT

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/2/2013 11:18:00 AM

Sooooooooo romantic..veryyy .Have a happy newyear kash

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/2/2013 6:55:00 AM

What a tender sweet poetic write! All the best in 2013 my good friend! Jack

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2013 1:32:00 PM

great tanka, Kash. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Len Gasun

Date: 1/1/2013 8:29:00 AM

So beautiful and romantic. I've enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing my dear poet friend, Kash. Have a Happy Happy New Year! love/hugs, Leonora

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/31/2012 1:37:00 PM

How will Andrea ever choose?? Your romantic poetry always steals my heart. PS....Happy New Year, dear friend, I thank you so much for always making me feel a better poet than I am, and for your many kind comments this past year. You have been a help when I've stumbled, and encouragement when I've lost my muse. I cannot thank you enough! Best Wishes in 2013 ~~!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2012 11:15:00 AM

Great descriptive work for the contest..Winning material in my book...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 5:49:00 AM

beautiful poetry Kash, happy new year...

David Williams

Date: 12/29/2012 2:53:00 PM

Kash, hope you get that overdue kiss, if we don't speak beforehand have a happy peaceful New Year...David

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/29/2012 9:50:00 AM

This is so very beautiful, a simply beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and romantic poem this morning! What a powerful piece, and gorgeous write Kashi, Great Work!!