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Closer Still

Closer still Long of evening’s moonlit skies Far beneath its reaching light Passion claims a longing heart As we melt this crimson night Deeply found of seamless folds Intertwined our pleasured play Shadows move on distant shores As our breath is swept away Fingers trace along the line Smooth as silk and spun of love Moistened dreams in silhouette Cast of sighing stars above Tasting slow the sweetest joy Layered close in rhythm’d time Dance upon these parted lips Fruits a’ flowing ~ tempting wine Formed as one in whispered word Closer still ~ desires plead Drenched in nectar born of petals Tenderly to fill the need Clinging tight as mountains move Snow capped worries left behind Deep within this endless realm Eternally to call you mine Good night Soupers

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Date: 5/21/2017 4:30:00 AM
Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully painted good night, romantic, sweet love poem Chris!:) Very enchanting! I truly enjoyed reading it! A 7 + ! A fav too.And thanks again so much for sharing!:) For sure I'll be back n' continue reading more of your very beautiful poems, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/22/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much again, I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem.
Date: 4/18/2017 10:00:00 AM
Fervent and effervescent,ardent and amorous,endearing and enticing....Soooo beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend. That is a wonderful list of words for my poem. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this.
Date: 4/17/2017 7:55:00 PM
At a loss for words, simply beautiful prose!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Arthur for your kind words on my poem.
Date: 4/17/2017 7:02:00 PM
I'd say that was one helluva good night Chris ..... beautifully written..
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much John. Some nights are definitely better than others. :)
Date: 4/17/2017 6:14:00 PM
wow! what a gorgeous and romantic poem, chris! this is a masterpiece...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for your kind thought on my poem.
Date: 4/17/2017 6:13:00 PM
Sensual and tender, beautifully done, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Agnes. I am happy you liked this one.

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