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Closer, Babe, To Fine

Closer, Babe, to Fine (lyrics with no tune yet) Baby, baby, baby, I think you’re super fine. To be with you beneath the moon I think would be divine. There is just one problem. While my mind’s on you, I’m not even on your radar, so I’m feeling blue. Chorus: Cause baby, baby, baby, you don’t even look my way. See me: I’m a feline. By your door, I’d wait all day. Catch me; be a canine. And let me hear you say you think of me at least now as closer, Babe, to fine. Baby, baby, baby, how I wish that I could be even close to being fine like you are to me. Just to touch your lips, I’d be your glass of wine. If I were a grape though, would you pluck me from the vine? Chorus: Cause baby, baby, baby, you don’t even look my way. See me: I’m a feline. By your door, I’d wait all day. Catch me; be a canine. And let me hear you say you think of me at least now as closer, Babe, to fine. Baby, baby, baby, may our destinies entwine in a midnight’s starry, starry sky. With you I want to shine! Sweet boy, how I worship you. I wish to make a shrine and pray you’ll love me back by giving me a sign! Chorus: Cause baby, baby, baby, you don’t even look my way. See me: I’m a feline. By your door, I’d wait all day. Catch me; be a canine. And let me hear you say you think of me at least now as closer, Babe, to fine. Feb. 22, 2023 for the "Closer to Fine" Poetry Contest of Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 2/23/2023 12:12:00 AM
A really masterful lyric, Andrea:)
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:23:00 PM
Just got to be 'Little Richard' to the tune of 'Oh my Soul' Honey Honey Honey, give me heaps of this poetry....Harry
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Date: 2/22/2023 12:40:00 PM
I opened your avatar dear poet; yes, if you were the grape, i'd pick you and dry you to the raisin and thread you to a necklace and wear you around my neck girlie...i'm allergic to the felinez and caninez ;) have a wonderful week...much love, james
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Date: 2/22/2023 12:24:00 PM
- Lovely song, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:15:00 AM
Hi Andrea, songs have a nice way of dealing with the emotions which daily comes our way, though not easy for most of us you simply get it all out. Keyboard, acoustic guitar with a midrange melodious chord I think it's nice.
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:52:00 AM
You have a knack for composing songs. Love the repetitions. Makes it a lively song. Hugs.
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