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Closed Doors

You left me and ran into a room Like you slammed, locked the door shut I followed you I tried to enter but the door was locked I banged on the door yelling and screaming please open up I just want to see you one last time Please don't leave me unlock the door and come out The door opens White light shines so bright I see your shadow A huge black hole appears and sucks me down to the bottom I wonder is my time near Can this all be so true Cold Rain drops falls from somewhere My eyes are full of sorrow and pain all i have to say is Why you leave me this way........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2016 2:07:00 PM
SONJA HUGGINS, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/17/2011 5:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sonja. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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