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Close Friends

My closest friends, who number three I heed not thus for loyalty and neither camaraderie but simply in proximity They live not down my alleyway nor porch, nor in my house per se but underneath my fringed toupee they're in my head, well stowed away ********************************

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Elizabeth Patience Semende

Date: 10/29/2013 11:18:00 AM

Nice write Delysia

Robin Davis

Date: 9/19/2013 10:06:00 PM

Cute poem. Its funny, comical, silly and keeps the interest of the reader. nice job

John Posey

Date: 7/10/2013 6:34:00 PM

I'm hoping I can make it four.... Great writing..... Jake

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/10/2013 12:05:00 PM

really good and humourous, well done, really love your poetry, have great day Gordon

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2013 11:30:00 PM

I was told it wasn't healthy to hear voices... or was it my imaginary friend that said that? Lol! I agree with Tim (the elder one... hehe) about the complex rhyming. I think it's great to have these "little mini you's" that you can talk to at anytime... makes those moments in life where you're alone much more bearable :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/15/2013 4:57:00 PM

Me, myself and I maybe?...Gotta love yourself before you can love anything or anybody else, huh? (That's what it says to me anyway) Brilliant and complicated rhyming here too, Delysia (And what a beautiful name too!) - Tim

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/9/2013 12:30:00 PM

Delightful! :) They sure are lucky to be there!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/8/2013 8:29:00 PM

I like your style of this poem. In life it is said that we can count our true friends in one hand and we will still have fingers left over. Thanks for sharing and also for reading my poem. glad that you enjoyed it. Lucilla