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My closest friends, who number three I heed not thus for loyalty and neither camaraderie but simply in proximity They live not down my alleyway nor porch, nor in my house per se but underneath my fringed toupee they're in my head, well stowed away ********************************

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/29/2013 11:18:00 AM
Nice write Delysia
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Date: 9/19/2013 10:06:00 PM
Cute poem. Its funny, comical, silly and keeps the interest of the reader. nice job
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Date: 7/10/2013 6:34:00 PM
I'm hoping I can make it four.... Great writing..... Jake
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Date: 4/10/2013 12:05:00 PM
really good and humourous, well done, really love your poetry, have great day Gordon
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Date: 3/22/2013 11:30:00 PM
I was told it wasn't healthy to hear voices... or was it my imaginary friend that said that? Lol! I agree with Tim (the elder one... hehe) about the complex rhyming. I think it's great to have these "little mini you's" that you can talk to at anytime... makes those moments in life where you're alone much more bearable :)
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:57:00 PM
Me, myself and I maybe?...Gotta love yourself before you can love anything or anybody else, huh? (That's what it says to me anyway) Brilliant and complicated rhyming here too, Delysia (And what a beautiful name too!) - Tim
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Date: 3/9/2013 12:30:00 PM
Delightful! :) They sure are lucky to be there!
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Date: 3/8/2013 8:29:00 PM
I like your style of this poem. In life it is said that we can count our true friends in one hand and we will still have fingers left over. Thanks for sharing and also for reading my poem. glad that you enjoyed it. Lucilla
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Date: 10/11/2012 5:28:00 AM
Delysia, just dropping by to say hello :) Hope you are having a great week! love Wilma
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:22:00 AM
Delysia, congrats on your 1st place win with this fun write! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/6/2012 3:11:00 PM
Go a huge charge out of this one, my dear Delysia! Congrats on your win... hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's contest Delysia. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2012 7:52:00 PM
Very good poem here Delysia.A witty one!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/4/2012 3:53:00 PM
Beautiful and fine write,Delysia...Congratulations on your well deserved win....
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Date: 10/4/2012 1:00:00 PM
How very cute. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:41:00 AM
hahahahaha I have a few friends like these...minus the toupee!! Funny! gwendolen
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:13:00 PM
CONGRATS DELYSHIA ON A FIRST PLACE SUPER WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this nicely written poem.
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:10:00 PM
Delysia, congratulations In Susan's "Any poem under 14 lines" contest. Had fun reading all her winners. take care~ PD
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Date: 10/3/2012 12:24:00 PM
A wonderful way to keep friends close. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:43:00 AM
A beauty , congratulations Delysia well done xx
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:31:00 AM
Nice...many congrats!!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 9:02:00 AM
Great, interesting, funny poem... Congratulations on your win! Terry
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Date: 10/3/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations friend Delysia for winning the contest. It’s beautifully written poem. Cheers!!!!!!!!!(^_^) Maria
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Date: 9/30/2012 5:38:00 AM
Brilliant my friend! A very clever and humorous write!
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