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Clocks that Run Backwards to my day. I pray first and start off right. I don’t think I will make it through, if I do not. It is rough out there. I fight my way from sheets to the seat, of my car. I fight my way out the drive, down the street, and to the place I live… work. I battle and decide changes, and things that matter, to no one that cares at all. I break, long enough to inhale bad air, and cigarettes. No changes to the moment. I finish late, past 5:00 or 6:00 or 7:00 or… Homeward. Across the great divide. The one that is between me and living. I go there to sleep and eat. I think I have family there… Somewhere? I come back home to do as I am told. I need a new life, or a new clock. or both.

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Date: 11/25/2019 3:50:00 AM
It is rough out there, but I sense you are made of strong stuff Ann. If this is from your heart, you know what you must do ...and one must always be true to their heart. Always. Reading your poems and your comments, you have a legion of strong allies batting for you. But it is only within oneself, one takes the leap of faith in one's decisions, holding courage firmly by the reigns. Leanne X
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Date: 11/24/2019 7:15:00 PM
Sounds like a new life is for you! I got depressed just reading this! So, as a poem, it's very effective, Ann. :) gw
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/24/2019 7:29:00 PM
That is okay. Puts you in a mood, then write your way back out... lol... that is the fun part... I am working on Christmas and Holiday but they keep heading back toward Halloween. Argg...alas... I will try again. :)
Date: 11/24/2019 5:05:00 PM
This is incredible Ann. I totally love it, but me being in the same situation, gate it. I can relate to what you have expressed so well. Thank you.
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Date: 11/24/2019 5:15:00 PM
I wish it were not so... for you ... or for me.. or anyone else... It is just the way... of things... We must remember priorities... and make new lists as we can. Have a lovely day or night, where ever in the world you are... now. Ty for stopping by... and ty for your kind remarks... Ann
Date: 11/24/2019 5:02:00 PM
My sweet friend Ann, Smile you still got me, WAIT!! I am not that great!! Love Ya Sis!! As my old friend the Silent One said! I hope all is okay?
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Date: 11/24/2019 5:13:00 PM
The soup is so kind.. full of heroes and angels that speak in words... whispered, and sometimes sang... all is well... ty however... God give you the very nicest day. Ann
Date: 11/24/2019 4:42:00 PM
you are writing a lot of sad poetry recently, i hope you are ok.. i felt the angst in this one...
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Date: 11/24/2019 5:11:00 PM
You are so sweet. I am okay. My son is disabled... he has my heart in knots, that do not have enough time to be undone, before I am gone. ... It gets better. God ever has His hand, and Angels come when called... truly... I know. Ty ... Ann
Date: 11/24/2019 2:17:00 PM
awesome write though rather depressing in its message - a situation so many are caught in :)
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thinking in circles today. Ty for your kind comments. Ann

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