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Clock Made of Dawn

Molded in darkness, clock made of dawn Traces my eye in the shape of a swan Wings made of fury, oblivion fire Dark edges consumed in celestial choir Horizon arise in the lies mesmerize Lost in the pools and in skies alibis For time by design is a mind paradigm realigns the divine to a high so sublime Memory verily nearly mirror me Goddess disguises rise on periphery A clock made of dawn, molded in dark In the shape of a swan, a perpetual arc Wings made of fury thus carry me bodily Render me consciously linger lobotomy Horror no more will I keep in dark secrecy Bathing in dawn thereupon holy infamy Wrap me in light then lower me solemnly Respite from the night flies fearless ferocity

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Date: 2/15/2024 2:13:00 AM
Hi Mat , such intricate and clever wordplay , thoroughly enjoyed every line , a beautiful uniqueness .
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/15/2024 9:29:00 AM
my gratitude to you for taking the time -
Date: 1/31/2024 12:32:00 PM
Really unique. I would almost say special, but you know... so powerful and dark for the dawn, maybe dawn has its own dark side. Beautiful writing.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/1/2024 7:58:00 AM
i appreciate this
Date: 1/31/2024 5:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Transformation and acceptance the key. Thanks
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/1/2024 7:58:00 AM
thank you for the time
Date: 1/30/2024 6:22:00 AM
This is incredibly written Mat with an intriguing title too. A very dark, atmospheric scene being played out - from darkness gradually into light. It’s so creative and imaginative and so well crafted. Great skill here being displayed. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/30/2024 8:07:00 AM
thank you for your time - deepest appreciations
Date: 1/28/2024 8:31:00 AM
This well-crafted poem about transformation from darkness to light, from fear to courage, and from despair to hope is a journey of self-discovery and the process of overcoming inner turmoil to find peace and strength.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/28/2024 8:48:00 PM
my gratitude to you for the comment -
Date: 1/28/2024 7:51:00 AM
I love so many lines in this dear mat, your way with phrasing thoughts that you want to deliver is very creative and unique, and definitely worth the read: pleasure reading your work.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/28/2024 8:48:00 PM
sincerest regards to you

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