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Clock Haiku

12 11 | 1 10 | 2 9 ______ © 3 8 4 7 5 6 the clock ticks slowly seconds, then minutes, then hours ~ time once gone is gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/2/2025 6:48:00 PM
So well said, lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations dear Jo! Honest message. :)
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Date: 7/1/2025 9:50:00 PM
My kind of shape! Congrats.
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Date: 7/1/2025 9:42:00 PM
Great idea. Beautiful shaped haiku. Congratulations on your great win, Joanna!
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Date: 7/1/2025 7:15:00 PM
Nice one Joanna. Clever idea. Well presented.
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Date: 6/22/2025 10:24:00 AM
Excellent ink Joanna, and don't you find time is flying quicker the older we get!
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