Clinging On

Beautiful write... one can only cling to hope. Loved the imagery

This is so positive my friend, hope is the savin clause for so many of us. That promise is a life saver to many of us. A gem. A fav... God bless you.

The metaphorical power of the lighthouse fused with the human condition makes for one powerful write. Congratulations! Brian

Wow so nice. And congrats on the placement

Clinging or grabbing..? We've done both and More..' till we're either rescued or swept Offshore.' Does blood pain and strain Dissolve? Is there gain? Does the Spirt? Brain; mend? Though We're never the same.!

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... serenely delighting! God bless you.

tense and powerful poem Paul...congratulations :)

Congratulations Paul. It is a really good one. I liked it!

Wow! Paul, You've penned a good entry for the content. I got the impression that she has Alzheimer's or dementia. Good title and content. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis

Uplifting write Paul. Congratulations on your win! :)

Congratulations Paul! Your imaginative poem "Clinging On", has earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. I was very strict; and yet, your poem easily earned its place on the winners list my friend, Emile.

"She clings to hope." Paul, these four words cling to me. Since you are able to feel my heart through "my words," you can clearly understand why I say this. At the end of the day, after moments and emotions in life have tangled and twisted around my being and in my mind- I see a rainbow. (I have hope). This is tender and beautiful, all at the same time, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Dear Paul, now here is an example of an excellent Waltz Wave to be sure. Such dynamic imagery fills the small physical space of this poetry form till it spills the brim to sweep one's imagination out into an ocean of dramatic emotion. Love it! A metaphorical gem, my friend! Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

I don't see how those lighthouses and buoys hold up, but they do. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Sara

oh, I love this! Hope you are well, my friend

So well said, Paul!

Keep writing Paul and I'll keep reading. Cheers - Gary

Imagery and poetry of us -- (Humanity). Par Excellence, Brother Paul. Paz!

Hi Paul, such a potent, clear message for us all to think about and to interpret and understand why? Yet the will to not give in I feel is even stronger, hope can be evil at times - Pandora's box. Hugs, warm regard, Jennifer

A lovely write/picture. Good luck. Have a blessed day................

Awesome, this has layers of meaning Paul, the lighthouse and a woman's hope-filled mind, brilliant:)

Good Morning Paul. My goodness. I found this entry very powerful and expressive. Anyone who finds themselves in this state of mind will understand your every word. Your entry causes the reader to pause to soak in the meaning. Blessings to you for such understanding of this fragile and ongoing situation for many. May this day find you well. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. PS - You wrote with dignity grace and respect.(smile)

very nicely done, Paul. You are always exceptional at these short poems

An intense Waltz Wave Paul. Exudes sorrow somewhat, til the last line where you enlighten us, that she retains hope. Well constructed and you succeeded in telling a whole story in such few words. This, I admire greatly. Best wishes.

Well crafted, emotional piece. Beautifully done!