Climate

Humidity

I called my  love on the phone, to say hi!
Duplicating the moments around the sky 

With not many things to say :-) 
I asked about the climate per say

A nice way to converse,
Nonstop heat throughout the universe

Smiling, without many words to share
I stroked the phone, describing the hot air.

"It’s getting hot outside"
I'm just here Enjoying the sunrise."

--Smooth and slow the steam in Aspen has me beat
--Suddenly 99.9 degrees was the new rising heat

I chuckled and added, -looks like 100% chance of rain
Keeping myself inside, with a wetness calming sane

A new flash flood coming in
Reminding him how easy it is to slip in mud

I continued to talk and toke
Then he joined me with a joke.

Replying, with a tease.

         "Wow!"
I feel the wetness over there
I would not mind taking a dive in THAT flood
Don't worry I know how to handle slippery mud
---from back to front. 
It's looking gloomy out here without  my love
Down here in Mandalay it drips a lot
Pure satisfaction when the climate in Aspen gets hot
Could you be kind in sending a picture of how wet it is down there?
I will call you back when the drizzling stops over here.


By: P.D.  ( please judge the name, not the poem )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/6/2015 7:42:00 AM
PD, this is delightful, sorry about the mix-up in the hot contest, this poem is deserving of placement and thanks for all the visits and comments on my poetry
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Date: 10/11/2013 11:03:00 PM
Good morning my dearest sis! So love and enjoyed this stupendous & stellar write of yours. I've read this before; but, I think I missed to give my comments. It painted again huge smiles on my face. I saw triple 9 there. Thanks a lot again. Thank you so much as well for your lovely comments on my latest poem. So happy you've enjoyed it. Number 7 is also the best # for me still. And you're also my best, greatest & fave ever. Thanks for everything! Biggest warm hugs! lovem4evr,Leonora
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Date: 5/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
Do you think I could get away with some of my tales of Eskimo Nell, or is it just the ladyships that do that lol. Deffo my kind of humour this my Sweet Dark Friend, up a shade. Take care, Richard
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Date: 1/4/2013 10:13:00 AM
Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, P.D. I'm not on here a lot anymore, just stop in now and then. Great poem. Good poets can put a lot between the lines.
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Date: 12/31/2012 10:23:00 AM
wow i see this as so sensuous,Pd, or am i wishful thinking, i hope not..come on back lady, your letting down the lone star state it needs you too...
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:34:00 PM
Fun to read. I enjoyed the story and the phone call. - Bill Cook
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Date: 8/21/2010 9:33:00 AM
i think we have a huge weather sytem moving in over here.its going to be fun playing in all the rain and floods my queen of mmmmmmmmmmmm love u
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:43:00 AM
Your too much for me... LOL. Ha! Ya' know I didn't enter because I've got plenty more to add to it. I thught the entries were'nt due for a while. That was just the "beginning far from the ending!" Hahahahhaa!! I wrote another one called slammed in the slammer to give you some material to slam back! I'm waiting. L.L.
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:07:00 AM
This one is truly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for your comment on my poetry!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:15:00 PM
I just wanted to thank you for your comment on my piece today, and tell you that I enjoyed this read. From small-talk to dirty-talk I suppose ;).
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Date: 7/14/2010 11:07:00 PM
very nicely placed rhyme with easy flow and images that spread from your lines,,wonderfully penned,,and i truly want to Thank You for reading my words and leaving your words behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 7/6/2010 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for your encouraging words on ...funereal. This is a well rhymed, realistic description of the sometimes kind...sometimes cruel and now unpredictable weather....the weatherman's got you.
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:54:00 PM
lol.Sid i know you have a dirty mind because naughty minds think alike! and i can totally read yours. you nasty woman.xp i can only imagine how many "he's" you got getting lost down there in the bad wheather. hope u had a good 4th of july too ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:34:00 PM
Nicely written this made me smile. Very witty words.
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:52:00 PM
either i have a dirty mind....:P great write! loved it haha
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Date: 7/4/2010 12:54:00 PM
good one!!
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Date: 7/4/2010 9:32:00 AM
this is true about weather. great poem
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:58:00 AM
ENJoYING YoUR WITS THIS MoRNING. U GoT ME SMILEING 2 THE HEAT. LoL IN ASPEN.-SKAT
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:56:00 AM
Wow, pd, absolutely great a write! Enjoyed this read! Havea great week and thanks for all your friendly comments!...:)..Gert
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Date: 7/4/2010 7:19:00 AM
Girl you absolutely slay me! I've never seen anyone use puns so provocatively clever before! Or is it just my dirty old mind? Either way I loved this poem. You have S-mail!!
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Date: 7/4/2010 6:01:00 AM
Hey! I used to play in the Aspen music festival every summer. It's cold as hell in the morning, doesn't get too hot in the afternoon. You must have hit some bad days. "On the Road to Mandalay, where the flying fishes play." Hey, that's Rudyard by God Kipling! Good write, oh destroyer of poets. Love, daver
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:51:00 AM
Hehe, I want to experience this kind of weather :) enjoyed it with a chuckle Wilma
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:19:00 PM
see? now it's my turn to comment all over here! and haha somehow I knew you'd love that ;) that was definitely a wacky challenge with all those given words--- and aha I see Andrea commenting down here too--it's Pinocchio ^_^ hope that helps & lol that would be hard to imagine getting out the door--what more brush your teeth & wash your face--careful your nose doesn't go down the drain!?? no mirrors of any sort? haha ---andrea I am still replying to your email haha
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:02:00 PM
for sure, P.D. you are not ordinary! Pinnochio? I do not know how to spell it either, but your nose must be ten feet long or longer, dear.How do you get out of the door every morning? hahahaha
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:01:00 PM
haha this write sure got my mind reeling--naughty naughty ;) like is she or isn't she talking about what I think she is?? but with you will never know of course ;) and that's ok I think I've also commented on your writes for forever--btw if you want--go comment on my Rosie Hammond & the Vacuum Guy I believe you haven't seen that yet--I enjoyed writing that ;) thanks!
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