Clever Lady

Marries very old millionaires, But loves her busty young lovers. for Natalie’s Genius or Criminal contest

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 1:16:00 PM

So she was gay? Wow, those millionaires were easily fooled. Brilliant poem, Jack. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/29/2011 12:14:00 PM

This one is truly clever Jack-congrats. on your win in my contest :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2011 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in this contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2011 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 12:43:00 AM

Congrats, Jack. You sure think of simple ways to do some of the contests! You are the genius here!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/28/2011 10:47:00 PM

Congrats Jack on a fantastic win luv with these dazzling words reflecting contest theme so perfectly my friend.. oh so good...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2011 7:38:00 AM

Good one for the contest..Good idea to do a very short form also..Enjoyed..Not sure about the busty part...???At least I am thinking..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2011 10:55:00 PM

And how you DID this using a short form is criminal AND genius. GOOD ONE.