Nette Onclaud Poet Limerick

Clever Girl

A foxy dame passed through a diner
with auburn locks bouncing here and there.
    Dude sighed, “ take the best wine
    but tonight you’re all mine;
chimed she,” hike off; I’m this bar’s owner.”



Roy Jerden's Clean And Clever Limerick
11/16/2014

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Donna Jones November 21, 2014 at 7:22 PM Good goin'........:-) love it

Liam Mcdaid November 19, 2014 at 2:38 PM very beautifully sewn together excellent pen dear friend

Shadow Hamilton November 19, 2014 at 1:43 AM excellent Nette you nailed it gl in contest hugs

Sara Kendrick November 18, 2014 at 5:15 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..It is nice for the woman to be the winner..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

James Fraser November 18, 2014 at 2:39 PM Oh to have seen the dudes face, so out of place. Koolio Limerick Princess, hugs for you, James :)

Eve Roper November 17, 2014 at 9:10 PM Good limerick, Nette, love the girl's spunk

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2014 at 3:43 PM hahaha, yours has a great final line!! Glad to see you got a new contest up and I hope I can find time for it. I can't believe how far I am falling behind here. YIKES

Tim Smith November 17, 2014 at 12:05 PM Lol.....well done nette..huggs

Jack Ellison November 17, 2014 at 9:58 AM Loved the humour... it turns my crank!!! Do more... huggsies, Jack XXX

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 7:24 AM - Well done, Nette :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian November 17, 2014 at 6:02 AM I guess she told him! :) Didn't expect that twist at all, Nette. Thanks for your visit today. It is always good to hear from you. Hugs

Ken Carroll November 17, 2014 at 5:47 AM Such a clever and whimsical write Nette!

Banjo Casto November 17, 2014 at 5:38 AM I definitely had a much needed laugh. Men think they can always flirt around ( not me, lol).You wit shows in a clever repartee. Thank you for a win in your contest.

Jajosh Ongado November 17, 2014 at 5:26 AM Hah! This dude finally found his match. Playful limerick; the drinks are on me! Wow, Nette.