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softly caressed by red crushed velvet she flaunts her sensuality - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/17/2017 7:15:00 PM

Paul, my heart leaps with this sensual and passionate haiku. So delicately and beautifully expressed, enticing and exciting the senses so eloquently. An alluring write my friend! P. S. I so enjoy going through your list and reading your beautiful poetry!!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/18/2017 9:09:00 AM

Thank you for the awesome comments, Susan. It is very encouraging to get feedback like yours. I find flowers to be very inspiring, and I often use them metaphorically. Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/4/2017 11:31:00 AM

My friend, Paul - written like a true haiku master! The beauty, sensuality, and majesty of the Clematis artfully captured with a few succinct words! BRAVO! Hugs. Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2017 3:46:00 PM

Thank you for your complimentary remarks, Pandita...much appreciated. Hugs // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/13/2017 5:23:00 PM

Beautiful haiku on Clematis filled with beautiful passion. A beautiful 7 my dear friend. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 5/14/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Braja, my friend. Always a pleasure to have you visiting! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2017 12:54:00 PM

how subtle the passion within you 'ku lines, paul... you delight!.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2017 1:22:00 PM

Your feedback is always a pleasure to read, Nette....thank you:) Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/8/2017 2:38:00 PM

Clematis are pretty flowers in a garden.I have enjoyed this poem. Reguards Darlene

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2017 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Flowers are lovely, though some are more attractive than others! Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/8/2017 8:38:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely imagery write. Great haiku. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2017 12:36:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Ravi. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/7/2017 10:58:00 PM

So beautiful, and now I know the mystery! Where clamatis juice comes from!!! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2017 11:58:00 AM

I thought clamatis juice came from steaming clams! ~ Thank you for the 'beautiful' comment:) Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2017 9:48:00 AM

Perfect!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/6/2017 2:01:00 PM

Beautiful work Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 4:15:00 PM

Pleased to have you visiting twice in the same day, Charlie...thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2017 8:06:00 PM

Lovely and sensual one, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 4:14:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad you like it. Regards // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/5/2017 1:09:00 PM

Good word choices attracting the reader with their sensual, provocativeness. Emile.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 4:14:00 PM

You read it well, Emile. Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Anil Deo

Date: 5/5/2017 4:03:00 AM

Paul, a SEVEN for the most ordinary looking vine with the surprises that always make my summer heart leap like that of John the Baptist. I may be imagining Clematis has roots in "artifice" as well as in "shoot or branch - the Greek "klema"? If so, you outdid Demetrios today in a way (?). Love it, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 4:10:00 PM

Thank you for the insightful comments, Anil:) Outdoing Demetrios is beyond me...he is the no1 philosophical gardener! Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/4/2017 10:32:00 PM

Brilliant haiku... Great imagery... Loved it... Beautiful flower ...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 3:45:00 PM

Your lovely remarks are much appreciated, Supraja...thank you! Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 5/4/2017 9:32:00 PM

Very cleverly crafted Haiku Paul - The image you portrayed verse and the comparison to the Clematis is subtle and yet so tangible and sensual. A Big 7 ... Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2017 3:44:00 PM

Your feedback is right on the dot, Maria....thank you for a lovely visit and high rating. Regards // paul