Cleansing the Dust

My shoulders drag through whirls of crescent night under a wooden bridge this heart retains, a pile of thickened ash where reason hangs on edge, hollow the veins. Above a skyline, a deep madness roars oh, patience grows thin along slithered bends that I, in deep thought grope for fate’s comfort as street lantern descends. Nearing the foot, a dove rustles my skin its pearl-like glow cleanses a dusty face, soothing my troubled head so near the fall, so far a warm embrace. From nowhere, a glossed horizon appears connecting me back to life’s overpass, as birdsongs lift my glides till cinders fly as joy pours on life’s hourglass. John Lawless' Gathering Dust 3/02/2015
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Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Congrats on your winning work,Sara
A   Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome gathering Dust win..... Luv ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:30 PM
wonderful imagery and unique entry into the contest. Congrats for your win, Nette.
Haight Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Nette, so beautifully written and full of inspiration of how seeing and embracing joy in a magic moment can lift one's heart and soul out of the ashes. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Unique nette, keep them coming. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Congrats nette, another win in your column! BG
Lawless Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Nette, I had to play with this one to catch the many subtitles therein. As I love words and the nuances of poetic style it unfolded as I pondered them. Thank you for participating in the contest.
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 11:34 AM
an enchanting write Nette - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Beautiful poem well crafted. After all at the end all the dusty thoughts are cleansed and paved the way to new horizon. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:00 PM
One of the prettiest ones I have seen on the theme of dust!! nette. I just saw a comment from you that you had a soupie for me. Where is it?? (I will be here for twenty more min)
Fraser Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 1:09 PM
If this isn't on the winners podium, I'll eat my hat. Now, I'm off to buy a hat. Good luck Princess, hugs, James :)
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Imaginative wizardry with the pen. Well done. Emile. #7
Guzzi Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 9:26 AM
So nice to read your verse this morning nette- an uplifting tale. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Wonderful pen u hv nette,, amazingly beautiful is this one dear! Gl in contest!
Meade Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:26 PM
How quickly our hearts fill with dust of troubles and cinders of regret . . . these melancholy feelings drag us down - - - but hope, the wings of a dove -- lift our spirits. A lovely and compelling write dear Nette!7
Datu Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Transformational! You swept off the old dust and came out shining on the horizon. A phoenix kind of brilliant poetry, Nette
Smith Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 2:58 PM
There is hope for a heavy heart....hugs Tim
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Interesting work.If for a contest, reads likes winner..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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