Cleansing River Ty

Moving
Splashing
Reaching 
Cleansing
The moving river splashing my knee
A wash calmly, cleansing, reaching me

Heidi Sands

8/9/19

Placed 3rd in Your turn for a Tyburn Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/31/2019 5:33:00 AM
Now I feel like going swimming (lol) Awesome tyburn Heidi. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 8/31/2019 6:19:00 PM
Lol ..at first I read your comment and thought it said you felt like you are swimming. Thank you Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity to participate, and the placement :)
Date: 8/30/2019 7:46:00 AM
- Congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice weekend :)
Date: 8/10/2019 10:16:00 AM
Hi Heidi, I would to visit this river that you speak about. I enjoyed the peaceful and transquil tone of this piece. I wish you the best of luck in contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2019 10:27:00 AM
It's just around the corner from me now Alexis. I wish you could see it. Thank you for your kind comment and I hope you have a great weekend too :)
Date: 8/10/2019 10:07:00 AM
Very beautifully said, Heidi; sometimes difficult to stay clean in this world. Thank Nature for here steams and blessed, gentle splashing. Love the imagery and sense of this work!
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Date: 8/10/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Joe :)
Date: 8/9/2019 10:32:00 PM
Very nicely penned Heidi...GL in the contest..
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Jospeph. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 8/9/2019 7:31:00 PM
Well written and good luck Panagiota
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you very much:)
Date: 8/9/2019 5:33:00 PM
makes me feel the freshness of clear water.. very nice, heidi.. huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2019 7:49:00 PM
Nice! Thank you Nette :)
Date: 8/9/2019 5:05:00 PM
Excellent evocation of the sights and sounds of river..all the best, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! Goodnight :)
Date: 8/9/2019 4:30:00 PM
Nature's gifts Heidi. A life very Tyburn. Best of luck in the contest. : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/9/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 8/9/2019 3:48:00 PM
beautifully penned Heidi, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2019 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 8/9/2019 3:47:00 PM
- I like yours :) ... Well done, Heidi :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2019 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
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