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Cleansing River Ty

Moving Splashing Reaching Cleansing The moving river splashing my knee A wash calmly, cleansing, reaching me Heidi Sands 8/9/19 Placed 3rd in Your turn for a Tyburn Contest.

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Charles Messina

Date: 8/31/2019 5:33:00 AM

Now I feel like going swimming (lol) Awesome tyburn Heidi. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2019 6:19:00 PM

Lol ..at first I read your comment and thought it said you felt like you are swimming. Thank you Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity to participate, and the placement :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2019 7:46:00 AM

- Congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2019 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a nice weekend :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2019 10:16:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I would to visit this river that you speak about. I enjoyed the peaceful and transquil tone of this piece. I wish you the best of luck in contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2019 10:27:00 AM

It's just around the corner from me now Alexis. I wish you could see it. Thank you for your kind comment and I hope you have a great weekend too :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/10/2019 10:07:00 AM

Very beautifully said, Heidi; sometimes difficult to stay clean in this world. Thank Nature for here steams and blessed, gentle splashing. Love the imagery and sense of this work!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2019 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Joe :)