Cleaning Tomatoes

They sat in a large blue bowl all afternoon,
In tap water and stillness. 
She cleaned them that evening. 
She did not see the little cuts, not the gaping brown sores. 
She did not see the dirt specs float down the spirling drain. 
She saw perfection as it was, hard-won, with just reward. 
One bite as brilliant as the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful expression, thankyou
Beckman  Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Thanks!
Delaney Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Great imagery. Nothing like a garden fresh tomato. Enjoyed this one. SuZ
Beckman  Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Thanks!
Hankins Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Very nice metaphor, Nancy. Nicely done.
Beckman  Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Thank you!
Deremer Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Thank you for your poem.
Beckman  Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Glad you enjoyed it!
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